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Let Me Out

I’m wondering
how do we get up
and get dressed
find our way
out of this mess

is there a trap door
in the floor
or a secret passage
marked by elvish rhunes

that only appears
by the light of a full moon
or sun lighting the keyhole
at high noon

how do we escape 
from this straight jacket
of insanity and hate
avoid our fate
wipe clean the slate 
maybe through the sewer grate

there is a way to fix it
but should we even try
or just lay down 
on the riverbank
and drink 
some whisky and rye
laced with arsonic 
or cyanide

we have the power
but most don’t know it
or they’re too afraid to use it
because they might
blow it

angry as hell
but too scared 
to show it

we have the rock
in our hands
but hesitate
to throw it

because 
we might hit our brother
or father or mother
or the next door neighbor

or ourselves

They say all good things
will come to an end
what if 
the only good 
thing to come
is the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/18/2025 6:17:00 AM
very pessimistic poem, made me think of a Phil Collins song, thanks poet
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Date: 3/18/2025 2:40:00 AM
Jerry, a thought provoking poem, well penned.
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Date: 3/17/2025 6:50:00 PM
Powerful last stanza there, albeit 'a tad' pessimistic. Myself, I think that everything's realigning after too long a period of stagnation. So, let's see how everything shakes out once things are in their new place. I guess I'm optimistic...
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Date: 3/17/2025 6:16:00 PM
Wow. Souper Soupster you are. Fantastic. Keep on sharing!
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Date: 3/17/2025 6:02:00 PM
Very engaging and powerful write! I enjoyed the energy and in your face this is!
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