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Uncaptured sympathies 
From the lost departed 
No turning back 
All plans are thwarted 
Revelations and tears
Washed away with the rain 
Forgotten tragedies 
Unspoken in vain 
Here I am a castaway
On a passengerless ship
Thanks for the freedom 
No longer your whip

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Date: 2/29/2024 6:42:00 PM
A 'castaway on a passenger-less ship' perceives freedom altogether differently than we in the West do. Nice perspective, Kelli. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/27/2024 6:17:00 AM
wow your words cut to the deep, your a sage poet dear heart, write on :)
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:53:00 PM
Very well written pulls us into the deep feelings and emotions!
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Kelli White
Date: 2/26/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Karen, kelli

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