Free

Uncaptured sympathies 
From the lost departed 
No turning back 
All plans are thwarted 
Revelations and tears
Washed away with the rain 
Forgotten tragedies 
Unspoken in vain 
Here I am a castaway
On a passengerless ship
Thanks for the freedom 
No longer your whip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wolf Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:42 PM
A 'castaway on a passenger-less ship' perceives freedom altogether differently than we in the West do. Nice perspective, Kelli. ~ Gershon
Rose  Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 6:17 AM
wow your words cut to the deep, your a sage poet dear heart, write on :)
Jones Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 1:53 PM
Very well written pulls us into the deep feelings and emotions!
White Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Karen, kelli
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace