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Duo: Engage-Enrage

Engage

Go back to basic
conversation calm and cool.
No need for backchat.


Enrage

Hurt heart hot with rage-
Deafened encapsulation.
Left without true peace.


28/10/2018:  "A time for silence and a time to speak..."

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Aqua Marine Date: 12/3/2019 8:56:00 AM I have reposted this poem today- slightly different format. Extra notes posted, in light of the aggression that is sometimes displayed on the PS site, and between people in different aspects of life. I prefer to have peaceful relationships wherever possible. If you have a personal problem with me for any reason- please would you soupmail me. ~~~Aqua Marine~~~ Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 12/9/2018 8:20:00 AM Should we engage others as if speaking to our own beloved family and friends? Yes, unless otherwise and in fair and righteous judgment we condemn the evil in this world and its faithful followers. You poem delivers a great and true message my good friend. Love and empathy defeats hate and darkness. A fav.. gifting verse to speak truth is a sacred duty of we poets. Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 12/30/2018 1:11:00 PM Dearest Robert, your wise words of love and empathy defeating hate and darkness are timely indeed. Thank you for your warm support- we are all very much in need of encouragement in a divisive world. Let's do our best to take sides with what is good behaviour. Warm regards to you and your family, a d Happy Writing for many months to come! (((HUGS)))

Maurice Rigoler Date: 12/8/2018 8:47:00 AM Easier said than done, but sound advice nonetheless. Thank you for stopping by, Aqua Marine. Best to you as an artist and writer. / M Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 12/30/2018 1:06:00 PM Dearest Maurice, I am so sorry it has taken so long to respond to your comment- I agree with you that its easier said than done, but we can only keep trying our best to stay cool, calm, and collected. I'm trying my best! Warm regards and Happy Writing for next year....(((HUGS)))

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/10/2018 7:26:00 PM Dear Aqua Marine: Nicely said. Enjoyed. Leon Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 11/13/2018 4:53:00 PM Dear Leon, it is always a pleasure to have you visit and comment, thank you so much! : )))

Harry Horsman Date: 11/9/2018 4:47:00 PM Clever poetry, straight to the point.. Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 11/10/2018 11:18:00 PM I appreciate your visit and comment, Harry H - there is no point trying to prove a point, by engaging an angry person in conversation. Strong emotions "switch off" the ability to reason.That's how wars start. Sometimes it's better to be quiet. ( but still write poetry, of course! : )))

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/5/2018 3:30:00 AM I like the wording - no need for backchat. Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 11/10/2018 11:28:00 PM Thank you, Kim! Freedom of speech gets lost trying to transliterate arguments into peaceful interactions...A war of words starts with two " sides" who refuse to interact amicably- in war, defense and attack become one and the same thing. Not always easy to remain calm! (((HUGS))) I appreciate your comment and visit.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/29/2018 8:54:00 AM Well demonstrated. Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 10/29/2018 10:12:00 AM Thank you for your visit and comment, Richard! :))

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 10/28/2018 12:56:00 AM good Senryu /// be engaged with lovely mentality to settlement all enraging // preened nicely Login to Reply Aqua Marine Date: 10/28/2018 6:32:00 PM Thank you very much, Mahtab! Yes, at least let's try to be calm, and kind. ( I love the words " preened nicely..." : )) your visit and comment are very welcome!