drink wine

Remember this poets, drink wine,
It is not talent that is important,
It is to have heart, drink wine,
Offer a drink to a friend or student

Make your friends, young and new, cry
Speaking of the primroses you offer,
Speaking of the water lilies in a famous museum,
Tearing all your uncertain poems,

See, this poem has little interest, let’s drink wine instead,
It is made of banalities without emotions, jewels thrown,
What I forgot when I wrote is to address you,
To have heart, to tell you of my loves,

Remember this poets, drink wine, admire your mother
Those who speak to you, hold you captive,
It takes a great silence virgin, the friendship of Mark Aurel
That the soul may walk in the snow,
Alone. Come with me. Come with me.
Drink wine. *


* with moderation and humour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 11/2/2024 9:45:00 AM
I agree. Let's drink wine. And make mine nice and sweet and red
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Date: 10/29/2024 2:20:00 PM
Drink wine and be happy and prosper dear poet !
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/30/2024 1:39:00 AM
thanks rose, it is occasional of course
Date: 10/29/2024 5:31:00 AM
Nice gesture but after watching alcoholic grandpa I never did pick up the habit and taught my son not to do the same! Enjoyed reading.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/30/2024 1:37:00 AM
thanks Karen , i confirm you did the right choice, drinking is always with moderation or occasional, thanks for stooping by enjoy your morning
Date: 10/27/2024 8:56:00 AM
Great advice, Yann. I love excellent white wine, but with doctor's orders, I must stop to red wine., which I love too. You must be careful to keep the volume around 12%.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:17:00 PM
yes victor i can't drink too red wines and liquores, i had some regrets writing my poem, your comment is very thoughtful, thanks
Date: 10/27/2024 3:27:00 AM
Offering friendship, showing hospitality, letting others partake in a drink, these are all sweet gestures. Take life easy and get along with others in a mood of gaiety. A beautiful poem dear Yaan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:12:00 AM
thanks a lot for the kind support and comment, your words are beautiful yann
Date: 10/26/2024 2:24:00 PM
Kind of humorous. Especially giving wine to students. I would get fired! Ironically the church I was raised in forbade drink of any alcohol. I have since had some wine. I rather enjoy it's taste. But it is only healthful to drink it in moderation.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:09:00 AM
thannk you so much andrea, you are right, wine is dangerous fo health but not for the mind or spirit, have a nice week, it was great to read you comment
Date: 10/26/2024 12:33:00 PM
Drink wine, Jesus drank wine! Drink plenty with meals, it's the heart of the course. 1 Timothy 5:23 - Drink no longer water, but use a little wine for thy stomach's sake and thine often infirmities. Lovely poem, Yann so kind. Enjoyed! Ooh lala
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:11:00 AM
thanks for the beautiful comment anaya, i adore the biblical references, so enjoyable to be confirmed by "sacred" books best wishes poet
Date: 10/26/2024 11:27:00 AM
Yes, in moderation. It is nice to share and relax within a safe group. Recently went to a winery with my Dad, 2 sisters and brother to celebrate birthdays. We had such a fun time, put away 5 bottles…what?! I drank lots of water and of course we had snacks. We sat outside on a lovely day and made a memory. Love the drifting thought of your poem, as if completely relaxed. Hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:15:00 AM
thanks for the humorous and friendly comment kim, i am happy you had good time with close family, best wishes to you and family , thanks a lot yann
Date: 10/26/2024 10:25:00 AM
a nice poem about making memories and being with people you love while being surrounded by wine.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/27/2024 8:15:00 AM
almost youth memories here, people we love is the most important part, best wishes poet
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