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Crested Mountain

The mountain was crested with snow
towering in the slate gray sky
Oh, how it made me wonder why?
Where I am going, I don't know!

A light wind whistled through the trees
Could answers be calling to me?
In this familiar place to be?
I tried to listen with some ease.

Then, it seemed the mountain did speak
with strength across the frozen ice
It brought me some thoughts, oh so nice!
Beauty all around,, nothing bleak

The crested mountain had its say
This moment for beauty to touch
The rest didn't matter so much
Absorbed with silver, white and gray

Heidi Sands

1/13/25

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Ink Empress Date: 1/15/2025 1:36:00 AM This is so beautiful and so very deeply moving dear poetic soul, i absolutely love the way youv delivered this in such a descriptive manner! Soul warming and so serene is the way youv woven words. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always I also sent you a soupmail. Hope your week goes well Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/15/2025 5:05:00 AM Thank you very much. Ok. I will look :)

Deb M Date: 1/14/2025 3:19:00 PM A truly lovely peaceful poem Heidi….wonderful imagery! Debx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 4:26:00 PM Thank you Deb. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Joe Dimino Date: 1/14/2025 9:38:00 AM "The crested mountain had its say This moment for beauty to touch The rest didn't matter so much Absorbed with silver, white and gray" -- Transcending poetry...love it! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 2:22:00 PM Thanks so much Joe :)

John Read Date: 1/14/2025 7:06:00 AM Love your poem Heidi your words paint the perfect picture. xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 2:22:00 PM Thank you John. I am happy to hear that :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/13/2025 7:54:00 PM Only a poetic soul like yours can think of things like this, Heidi -- a crested mountain speaks! ... Sigh, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 4:06:00 AM Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your thoughtful comment :)

Sotto Poet Date: 1/13/2025 4:41:00 PM I treasured the artistry of this well-crafted poem, Heidi. I could envision the setting as I read this piece of poetry. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 4:05:00 AM Thank you for the kind feedback Sotto. I hope you have a great day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/13/2025 4:10:00 PM Hello Heidi, Wow! i could picture the scene as i red this poem. My fav. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/14/2025 9:55:00 AM Heidi , as I read this poem, I could picture the scene. Then i made it my fav. I am glad i made your day brighter. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2025 4:04:00 AM I am happy to hear that. Thank you very much Darlene . Hugs :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 1/13/2025 2:30:00 PM Enjoyed this beautifully composed poem, Heidi:-) Blessings to you, my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/13/2025 2:38:00 PM Thank you Edward. Nice to see you! Happy New Year. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2025 12:17:00 PM - I think the mountain welcomed you, Heidi ... a lovely poem :) - hugs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/13/2025 12:54:00 PM Yes it did Anne-Lise. . Thank you. Hugs :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 1/13/2025 12:02:00 PM Very nice! Cool reading! Have a wonderful day ~ AA Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/13/2025 12:53:00 PM Thank you Abdullah :)