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Crested Mountain

The mountain was crested with snow towering in the slate gray sky Oh, how it made me wonder why? Where I am going, I don't know! A light wind whistled through the trees Could answers be calling to me? In this familiar place to be? I tried to listen with some ease. Then, it seemed the mountain did speak with strength across the frozen ice It brought me some thoughts, oh so nice! Beauty all around,, nothing bleak The crested mountain had its say This moment for beauty to touch The rest didn't matter so much Absorbed with silver, white and gray Heidi Sands 1/13/25 *8 Syllables (C)opyright

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/15/2025 1:36:00 AM

This is so beautiful and so very deeply moving dear poetic soul, i absolutely love the way youv delivered this in such a descriptive manner! Soul warming and so serene is the way youv woven words. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always I also sent you a soupmail. Hope your week goes well

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2025 5:05:00 AM

Thank you very much. Ok. I will look :)

Deb M

Date: 1/14/2025 3:19:00 PM

A truly lovely peaceful poem Heidi….wonderful imagery! Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2025 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Deb. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/14/2025 9:38:00 AM

"The crested mountain had its say This moment for beauty to touch The rest didn't matter so much Absorbed with silver, white and gray" -- Transcending poetry...love it!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2025 2:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Joe :)