Heidi Sands Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Crested Mountain

The mountain was crested with snow
towering in the slate gray sky
Oh, how it made me wonder why?
Where I am going, I don't know!

A light wind whistled through the trees
Could answers be calling to me?
In this familiar place to be?
I tried to listen with some ease.

Then, it seemed the mountain did speak
with strength across the frozen ice
It brought me some thoughts, oh so nice!
Beauty all around,, nothing bleak

The crested mountain had its say
This moment for beauty to touch
The rest didn't matter so much
Absorbed with silver, white and gray

Heidi Sands

1/13/25

*8 Syllables

(C)opyright

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ink Empress January 15, 2025 at 1:36 AM This is so beautiful and so very deeply moving dear poetic soul, i absolutely love the way youv delivered this in such a descriptive manner! Soul warming and so serene is the way youv woven words. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always I also sent you a soupmail. Hope your week goes well Heidi Sands January 15, 2025 at 5:05 AM Thank you very much. Ok. I will look :)

Deb M January 14, 2025 at 3:19 PM A truly lovely peaceful poem Heidi….wonderful imagery! Debx Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 4:26 PM Thank you Deb. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Joseph P. DiMino January 14, 2025 at 9:38 AM "The crested mountain had its say This moment for beauty to touch The rest didn't matter so much Absorbed with silver, white and gray" -- Transcending poetry...love it! Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 2:22 PM Thanks so much Joe :)

John Read January 14, 2025 at 7:06 AM Love your poem Heidi your words paint the perfect picture. xx Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 2:22 PM Thank you John. I am happy to hear that :)

Gershon Wolf January 13, 2025 at 7:54 PM Only a poetic soul like yours can think of things like this, Heidi -- a crested mountain speaks! ... Sigh, Gershon Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 4:06 AM Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your thoughtful comment :)

Sotto Poet January 13, 2025 at 4:41 PM I treasured the artistry of this well-crafted poem, Heidi. I could envision the setting as I read this piece of poetry. Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 4:05 AM Thank you for the kind feedback Sotto. I hope you have a great day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2025 at 4:10 PM Hello Heidi, Wow! i could picture the scene as i red this poem. My fav. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu January 14, 2025 at 9:55 AM Heidi , as I read this poem, I could picture the scene. Then i made it my fav. I am glad i made your day brighter. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands January 14, 2025 at 4:04 AM I am happy to hear that. Thank you very much Darlene . Hugs :)

Edward Ibeh January 13, 2025 at 2:30 PM Enjoyed this beautifully composed poem, Heidi:-) Blessings to you, my friend. Heidi Sands January 13, 2025 at 2:38 PM Thank you Edward. Nice to see you! Happy New Year. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2025 at 12:17 PM - I think the mountain welcomed you, Heidi ... a lovely poem :) - hugs Heidi Sands January 13, 2025 at 12:54 PM Yes it did Anne-Lise. . Thank you. Hugs :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy January 13, 2025 at 12:02 PM Very nice! Cool reading! Have a wonderful day ~ AA Heidi Sands January 13, 2025 at 12:53 PM Thank you Abdullah :)