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Pleiades contest for Andrea Deitrich.

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Cold

Cold January night,
Cast logs in the fireplace.
Come near the mistletoe,
Caress me with a kiss.
Can I hold you tightly?
Crush me with zeal, so sweet?
Change all feelings to love?



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Date: 1/2/2025 12:12:00 PM
Mahalo and my compliments as we share Andrea's Pleiades contest. Your premise precedes worthy expectations. Aloha~William
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Date: 1/2/2025 11:56:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/2/2025 7:49:00 AM
very romantic, congratulations
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Date: 1/2/2025 12:30:00 AM
lovely write, congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 1/1/2025 9:18:00 PM
Nice romantic one , Victor. Congrats in my contest and thanks for taking the challenge
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Date: 12/28/2024 7:05:00 PM
Very "warm" - enjoyed this poem of few words
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Date: 12/27/2024 10:05:00 PM
So well written on cold , i love the way your lines flow from to another. Such a seamless pleiades. I need to do this too, maybe later today. Youv definitely done one that is worthy of all the accolades! Best wishes dear victor
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Date: 12/26/2024 8:57:00 PM
A beautiful Pleaides, very much in tune with the winter season. Wish you all the best. Dear Victor, hope you had a lovely Christmas.
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Date: 12/26/2024 7:01:00 AM
- I could sit there for hours, Victor :) -Wishing you a happy new year :) - Thanks for the wonderful Christmas/New Year E-card :) - hugs
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Date: 12/26/2024 2:07:00 AM
Hi Victor, hope you had a peaceful Christmas day my thoughts were with you.
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Date: 12/25/2024 9:45:00 PM
The romantic side of you Victor shines through with this lovely Poetry of yours my friend. God bless you...
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Date: 12/25/2024 5:37:00 AM
Lovely poetry Victor, and a cosy warm picture too. Enjoy Christmas Day… Beryl
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Date: 12/24/2024 4:34:00 PM
so "cozy" and touching words, merry christmas poet
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Date: 12/24/2024 6:20:00 AM
A pleiades narratively read--nicely done, Victor.. Aloha~William
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Date: 12/23/2024 8:33:00 PM
Such a winsome portrayal of a cozy, pleasant winter evening, spiced with romance. Great picture, too. Happy holidays!
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Date: 12/23/2024 10:51:00 AM
The perfect place to be, wishing you a merry Christmas and a healthy new year Victor.
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Date: 12/23/2024 7:09:00 AM
A comforting place in a cold night. Sweet one Victor :)
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Date: 12/23/2024 6:57:00 AM
Indeed, cold weather is for snuggling. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 12/23/2024 6:09:00 AM
All the makings of a romantic night! Hugs
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Date: 12/23/2024 6:06:00 AM
You paint a cosy picture with your verse Victor. Merry Christmas. Tom
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