Cold

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Pleiades contest for Andrea Deitrich.

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Cold January night, Cast logs in the fireplace. Come near the mistletoe, Caress me with a kiss. Can I hold you tightly? Crush me with zeal, so sweet? Change all feelings to love? Placed 2

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/2/2025 12:12:00 PM

Mahalo and my compliments as we share Andrea's Pleiades contest. Your premise precedes worthy expectations. Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2025 11:56:00 AM

Congrats!

Terry Miller

Date: 1/2/2025 7:49:00 AM

very romantic, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 1/2/2025 12:30:00 AM

lovely write, congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2025 9:18:00 PM

Nice romantic one , Victor. Congrats in my contest and thanks for taking the challenge

Paige Hind

Date: 12/28/2024 7:05:00 PM

Very "warm" - enjoyed this poem of few words

Ink Empress

Date: 12/27/2024 10:05:00 PM

So well written on cold , i love the way your lines flow from to another. Such a seamless pleiades. I need to do this too, maybe later today. Youv definitely done one that is worthy of all the accolades! Best wishes dear victor