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Pleiades contest for Andrea Deitrich.

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Cold

Cold January night,
Cast logs in the fireplace.
Come near the mistletoe,
Caress me with a kiss.
Can I hold you tightly?
Crush me with zeal, so sweet?
Change all feelings to love?



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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Mahalo and my compliments as we share Andrea's Pleiades contest. Your premise precedes worthy expectations. Aloha~William
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Congrats!
Miller Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 7:49 AM
very romantic, congratulations
mysore Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:30 AM
lovely write, congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Nice romantic one , Victor. Congrats in my contest and thanks for taking the challenge
Hind Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 7:05 PM
Very "warm" - enjoyed this poem of few words
Empress Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 10:05 PM
So well written on cold , i love the way your lines flow from to another. Such a seamless pleiades. I need to do this too, maybe later today. Youv definitely done one that is worthy of all the accolades! Best wishes dear victor
George Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 8:57 PM
A beautiful Pleaides, very much in tune with the winter season. Wish you all the best. Dear Victor, hope you had a lovely Christmas.
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 7:01 AM
- I could sit there for hours, Victor :) -Wishing you a happy new year :) - Thanks for the wonderful Christmas/New Year E-card :) - hugs
Read Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 2:07 AM
Hi Victor, hope you had a peaceful Christmas day my thoughts were with you.
Tor Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 9:45 PM
The romantic side of you Victor shines through with this lovely Poetry of yours my friend. God bless you...
Edmonds  Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Lovely poetry Victor, and a cosy warm picture too. Enjoy Christmas Day… Beryl
Rolland Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 4:34 PM
so "cozy" and touching words, merry christmas poet
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:20 AM
A pleiades narratively read--nicely done, Victor.. Aloha~William
Buehler Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 8:33 PM
Such a winsome portrayal of a cozy, pleasant winter evening, spiced with romance. Great picture, too. Happy holidays!
Read Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 10:51 AM
The perfect place to be, wishing you a merry Christmas and a healthy new year Victor.
Sands Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 7:09 AM
A comforting place in a cold night. Sweet one Victor :)
DiMino Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Indeed, cold weather is for snuggling. Blessings my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 6:09 AM
All the makings of a romantic night! Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 6:06 AM
You paint a cosy picture with your verse Victor. Merry Christmas. Tom
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