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autumn library

Daniel Henry Rodgers

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“In autumn, the earth becomes a manuscript, each leaf a page turned by the wind.” 
- Poet

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Autumn Library

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dawn blinks—
     saffron spilling
         over ridge-lines marigold
             plaiting the first veins of leaves

         air tastes of dew and oak
             crisp on the tongue
                 frost caresses lips
                     sun touches frozen moss

             clouds vellum blushed with ochre
         tremble above waking trees
     the woods inhale—maple beech ash
  folios loosening in gentle flight

     spiraling sentences into currents
         hills bend beneath layered chapters
             meadows kissed in honeyed amber
                 a squirrel startles
                     scurries across twigs

                 lakes mirror sky
             stone flakes slipping
         tiny splashes like punctuation
     ripples spiraling like footnotes

     smoke drifts from chimneys
         cinnamon etching air
             into loose paragraphs
                 geese scribe the horizon—

                     black strokes through viscous light
                 wings scripting distance
             a sentence that begins
         and begins

         merry winds—
     custodians page-turners
 flutter across sky hill lake
     clouds fray to parchment
         hills darken to clove
             lakes gloss with frost

             i lift one leaf—
         its veins a compressed library
     of marigold sienna auburn

     i release it—
         wind carries it tumbling
             a thought in passing flight

             afternoon beckons
         golden light braiding branches
     shadows stretch across slopes
 lakes trembling with leaf-fall

     everything turns pages
         reordering the archive
             with invisible fingers

             evening gathers—
         sunset flourishing amber
     spines of light warmth diffused
into autumn’s margins


     fields fold into winding hills
            exhaling the days warmth

         the blood moon ascends—
     a pale index at book’s edge
         calling night into order
             illuminating every scattered page

             the library sleeps beneath it
         perfumed with wet leaves pine
     cinnamon smoke rustling faintly
 in dreams

     nothing is lost—
         every tint every flicker
             archived in endless margins
                 circling spiraling alive

                     an autumn day
                         leafing through
                             season’s palette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/18/2025 7:56:00 AM
This is a poem a writer commits much time and love to before putting the pen down. Not that you don't always, it feels especially true for this poem. WORTH IT. You achieved a remarkable write with captivating imagery. Sentences, chapters, paragraphs, pages and more such terms throughout are a poem within the poem. I try not to repeat words & 'assuming' you do, too, I doubt you know sentence is used twice, you could substitute 'statement' for one, IF YOU WISH. Being helpful, not bossy!out of room
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Date: 9/17/2025 9:27:00 AM
Daniel, there's a lot happening, and thanks to you, we can see it even if we never get to go where it's at. A fun catalog. Be well, enjoy everything out there and keep smiling!!
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Date: 9/13/2025 7:38:00 AM
Dear Daniel, I love autumn and I adore your amazing use of vibrant autumn language, imagery and metaphors that tingle my imagination the way a crisp autumn breeze goosebumps skin and catches the breath. Your poem is so evocative, emotive, so beautifully written, your voice the perfect accompaniment. Your extended metaphor of pages as keepers of thoughts, feelings and images, but also, the "merry winds" as page-turners of time passing by, is exquisite. Your last 3 lines are a divine finale to a poetic, captivating, introspective, sensory, emotional feast. I could go on and on.. haha! A fav! Warmest wishes, my gifted poet friend. . ~Susan
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Date: 9/12/2025 3:35:00 PM
I am in agreement with the comments here. I love how you made Autumn a page turner in a library- all the rich earthy images so down to our level of thinking, and beyond what we can fully comprehend, though. A book may be read by different people - all see through it differently. Excellent, Daniel. You're very accomplished- I love your work, how stunning. :)
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Date: 9/11/2025 1:13:00 PM
With hands clapping, I applaud your spoken word with kept mellifluous flow, and how cool is that. A library has many branches, like trees, your use of library's references amused, how clever. Imagery galore, and a beautiful autmn library fantasy! xXHugs
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Date: 9/11/2025 10:15:00 AM
This poem fills my senses! … saffron spilling over ridge-lines marigold… merry winds— custodians page-turners… golden light braiding branches… just a few goodies! Hugs
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Date: 9/11/2025 2:14:00 AM
Always so clever with your writing. So much to dwell on. I always admire your depth of thought.
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Date: 9/10/2025 2:30:00 PM
It's really cool how you fit this together with library references and mention of punctuation marks, etc. So beautiful and clever
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Date: 9/10/2025 11:07:00 AM
Your lyrical poetry dances through the woodland, singing softly. The imagery in your poem about fall is very stunning. As far as fall poems go, this one is head and shoulders above the others. As the leaves fall off the trees, their knowledge remains a glowing splendor, carried away by the autumn breezes. Wonderful description.
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Date: 9/10/2025 4:21:00 AM
- The colors and miracles of autumn bring out beautiful poems from a poet... I enjoy this, Daniel :) - Wonderfully described :) - hugs
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Date: 9/9/2025 9:57:00 PM
" i release it— wind carries it tumbling a thought in passing flight" Wow, I feel this is the best poem I have ever read about autumn... no flattery, but words coming from my heart. This library of trees stays in fluorescent magnificence of accumulated wisdom, scattered by autumnal winds. "merry winds— custodians page-turners flutter across sky hill lake". Clouds, wind , lakes all join in disseminating the wisdom of ages in ochre, cinnamon and golden tints. Through splendid imagery, you are able to sustain the analogy of autumn to a vast library. Great penning. Another attempt at novelty in creativity. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 9/9/2025 2:45:00 PM
Dear Daniel, I like your Autumn poem image too. The scattered pages of leaves from the library of trees. J :)
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/9/2025 2:55:00 PM
Dear Jeanette, I love the library and bookstores for they have always been a special place for me, and I feel even stronger about Autumn as you do after reading your award-winning poem. Blessings, Jeanette, Daniel
Date: 9/9/2025 10:49:00 AM
Your winding words wisp thru the willows, and whisper song.
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/9/2025 2:53:00 PM
Hello Randy, yes they do swirl and twirl in Autumn's merry winds. Blessings, Randy, Daniel
Date: 9/9/2025 10:12:00 AM
It seems you own a cornucopia filled with beautiful words to make us feel. One of my fav from you, spectacular comes to mind, fav autumn and all its glory too
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/9/2025 2:52:00 PM
Dear Rose, what a joy to see your note, and I am thankful for your insights. Autumn has always been magical and full of wonder and beauty, so it is easy to write about. Blessings, Rose, Daniel
Date: 9/8/2025 3:09:00 PM
Hello Daniel Henry Rodgers, Autumn is such a beajutiful season. Here in Canada the leaves re changing colours. Our summer is over. so sad. Enjohy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2025 10:30:00 AM
Hello Daniel Henry ,Dear Daniel Mother nature has already started to paint her colours on the leaves. I am certain it has begun where you are. the colours of the leaves are beautiful. This time of year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/9/2025 7:40:00 AM
Dear Darlene, It is a beautiful season and my most favorite. I am extra joyful this time of year. I am sure that Canada is about a month ahead of us hear in Pennsylvania. Enjoy! Blessings, Darlene, Daniel
Date: 9/8/2025 10:16:00 AM
My favourite 'book' autumn, you describe it so well Daniel. Tom
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/9/2025 7:38:00 AM
Hello Tom, Autumn is also my favorite book and I just love this time of year. Blessings, Tom, Daniel
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