Arrows

Swift arrows chased Chief Barefoot
But none fast enough to penetrate his skin
His paint pony Four leg was mighty 
Carrying Chief Barefoot faster than the wind
The other tribe could not compete
As Chief Barefoot flew effortlessly 
Across mountains and dunes
A mystical light enveloped he and his steed
A giant protective bubble 
Arrows bounced off in all directions 
As if angels of mercy rode with him 
The heat of the desert 
Could not drain their energy 
No peril could befall him
As darkness neared the
Footsteps and hooves 
Behind him had faded
And he knew now he and
His faithful steed 
Could rest under the moon
Without fear of injury
Or death

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Silent One

Date: 1/3/2024 6:51:00 AM

Some great imagery and verses in this poem. The vivid imagery of Chief Barefoot and his paint pony Four Leg moving with incredible speed and grace. Highlight the descriptive language that conveys the swiftness of their journey, such as "faster than the wind" and "effortlessly across mountains and dunes." Nicely done Kelli.

Kelli White
Date: 1/9/2024 11:54:00 AM

Thank you very much SO, kelli

Amy Bohack

Date: 1/2/2024 4:24:00 PM

such energy, thanks for sharing - blessings Amy

Kelli White
Date: 1/2/2024 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by,kelli