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Swift arrows chased Chief Barefoot But none fast enough to penetrate his skin His paint pony Four leg was mighty Carrying Chief Barefoot faster than the wind The other tribe could not compete As Chief Barefoot flew effortlessly Across mountains and dunes A mystical light enveloped he and his steed A giant protective bubble Arrows bounced off in all directions As if angels of mercy rode with him The heat of the desert Could not drain their energy No peril could befall him As darkness neared the Footsteps and hooves Behind him had faded And he knew now he and His faithful steed Could rest under the moon Without fear of injury Or death

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Date: 1/3/2024 6:51:00 AM
Some great imagery and verses in this poem. The vivid imagery of Chief Barefoot and his paint pony Four Leg moving with incredible speed and grace. Highlight the descriptive language that conveys the swiftness of their journey, such as "faster than the wind" and "effortlessly across mountains and dunes." Nicely done Kelli.
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Kelli White
Date: 1/9/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thank you very much SO, kelli
Date: 1/2/2024 4:24:00 PM
such energy, thanks for sharing - blessings Amy
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Kelli White
Date: 1/2/2024 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by,kelli

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