Allegory

Allegory allegory,
Giving God all the Glory
Mission impossible
With all that bravado
Smooth as silk
So believed by the ilk
Just like Tom Cruise
The mission is possible
With what we'll use
We'll just seemed 
falsely accused
Don't worry we cant lose

I am, I am is what he claimed
Not knowing the gravity
of using that name
Did you ask the farmer
before milking that cow
Why ask a spiritualist
the way and how
Why did you actually tell them
to kill the sow
Now your in trouble 
and don't know how?

So you made a wrong turn
and now your lost
Google maps not working
What good is being Boss
The hills are unforgiving
and it's starting to rain 
the passengers getting worried
and starting to act insane
the fear is unforgiving 
and so is the dark
we should've consider the life
we're living
before we embarked.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/19/2023 7:42:00 AM

Very impressive wordsmithing. Ideas and concepts extremely interesting and flow exception for such a deep creation. TRruly a poet's delight. Conclusions right on the mark. "" we should've consider the life we're living before we embarked."" Yes, we certainly must! A fav.. God bless.

Stephan McBride

Date: 8/18/2023 10:38:00 AM

This is great, humours with great knowledge and wisdom to gain

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/17/2023 6:35:00 PM

You have managed to create an enchanting and captivating piece with a remarkable and eloquent choice of words. The references incorporated further enhance its brilliance. Much appreciate your comment on my page.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2023 3:13:00 PM

I enjoyed the images in here and the scattered rhymes,which made it so cool

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2023 1:47:00 AM

Well, it is good that we don't know the future with its problems or we might never embark on any course of action for our lives. Most of the time the good outweighs the bad though. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/16/2023 9:40:00 PM

Hey situation, you may like "Rocket Cat " 6/15/23. Reference to Tom Cruise. Your work is quite intriguing, gave chills up my spine!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/16/2023 1:58:00 PM

beautiful allegory, the words are melodious indeed, a great "respect" for,that deep poem yann

Ink Empress

Date: 8/15/2023 8:27:00 PM

Very intriguing brilliant flow of words. Love the references made