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A Whisper in the Dusk

A whispered breath falls, Soft as twilight’s quiet glow, Parting shadows stretch— Silent echoes softly drift, A gentle, fading goodbye.

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Date: 7/29/2025 6:27:00 PM
Hello Rowna Velasco :-) Beautiful tanka!
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Date: 7/20/2025 10:53:00 PM
I love tanka. Yours is very lovely.
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