A Whisper in the Dusk

A whispered breath falls,
Soft as twilight’s quiet glow,
Parting shadows stretch—
Silent echoes softly drift,
A gentle, fading goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alhemaidy Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Hello Rowna Velasco :-) Beautiful tanka!
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 10:53 PM
I love tanka. Yours is very lovely.
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