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1401 Hiku Not a Swan Song

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           regal  swan  swimming ~x~x~x~x
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^~^~^~^~~plumage resplendent~^~^~^~^~^ ^^^^ 
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Date: 8/7/2025 11:36:00 PM
Dear Wendy, you are so good at shape haiku. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:11:00 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
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Date: 8/5/2025 7:07:00 AM
- WoooW ... wonderful shaped and written, S.V. :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 7:45:00 AM
Ahhh there's my hug. Anne-Lise you give the best hugs !!! Thanks my friend. In my book you are still the queen of shape.
Date: 8/5/2025 6:13:00 AM
Fantastic shape haiku
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Date: 8/5/2025 6:16:00 AM
hahahah you're kwik !

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