1401 Hiku Not a Swan Song

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           regal  swan  swimming ~x~x~x~x
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George Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Dear Wendy, you are so good at shape haiku. Congratulations on your first place win.
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:11 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:07 AM
- WoooW ... wonderful shaped and written, S.V. :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:45 AM
Ahhh there's my hug. Anne-Lise you give the best hugs !!! Thanks my friend. In my book you are still the queen of shape.
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