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- By The Streetlamp -

                               Those pancakes look delicious
                             Street food under the street lamp
                                 just right around the corner
                              The sweet scent wafts in the air
                               that fills the mouth with water
                                     Perceived as satisfying
                               Freshly baked with strawberry
                                  ... closer to heaven feeling

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2025 9:04:00 AM Great picture as well Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2025 9:04:00 AM Ahhh a sweet one! Congrats, Anne-lise Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/2/2025 1:38:00 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 8/2/2025 12:03:00 AM Congratulations poet friend on your win in this contest with a lovely verse on delicious pancakes, with their sweet scents wafting the air. These fill my mouth with water , too. Wishing you a delicious weekend. Login to Reply

Maclawrence Famuyiwa Date: 8/1/2025 3:59:00 PM Nice one. Congrats. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 7/30/2025 3:03:00 PM It is getting close to supper and now you have me wanting strawberry and whipped cream pancakes. lovely poem. love phyl Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 7/30/2025 12:19:00 PM Delicate phrasology Anne Lise, just as the Fancys i now percieve.' Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 7/30/2025 4:34:00 AM I found this contest challenging. So haven't thought of entering it. Anne, you have hit the nail on the head. All the best. Hugs! Login to Reply

Anne Winter Date: 7/30/2025 2:47:00 AM Dear Anne-Lise, food tastes 10 times better under the moonlight or street lamplight, I don't know why but it's like magic. Lovely poem! Best, Anne Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 7/29/2025 5:58:00 AM Yep, fastest way to my heart, is through my stomach. Love it! Login to Reply

John Fleming Date: 7/29/2025 2:40:00 AM Lovely poetry, Anne-Lise. This I find ever so appealing. Enjoyed! :) john Login to Reply

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 7/28/2025 8:54:00 PM Beautiful ! Wish you the best Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 7/28/2025 8:30:00 PM Sweet Streetlamp poem for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Bill Login to Reply

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/28/2025 5:27:00 PM What a fabulous take for the contest! I think this one is a winner for sure. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/28/2025 2:48:00 PM you've described this so well, anne-lise, that my mouth is watering! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/28/2025 1:19:00 PM What a wonderful write you have here. Love your great picture. Now I want pancakes. You cooking??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hugs... Have a fun day eating and writing away.......... Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/28/2025 11:58:00 AM mm delicious! hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 7/28/2025 11:29:00 AM Very well composed with many wonderful layers of imagery and thoughts, Anne-Lise, I wish you the best for the contest. Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 7/28/2025 11:22:00 AM Right on point dear poet, reads like a winner Login to Reply