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Everybody is not Shakespeare

Blog Posted:6/11/2012 2:26:00 PM






 
 
 



DAMIT!!
IF YOU HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING OUTSIDE
YOURSELF TO VALIDATE WHO YOU ARE
WITHIN THEN YOUR DOUBTING YOURSELF...... 



SIMPLE RULES ON HOW TO WRITE POETRY!!!

DON'T QUESTION  AND DOUBT WHAT NATURALLY  COMES OUT OF SELF. 

BE FREE!

BE YOUR SELF!

LET IT BE WHATEVER IT FREELY
BECOMES TO BE!!!!

BE STRAIGHT FORWARD!!!

LAST BUT NOT LEAST DON'T BE STUCK UP!!!

BE REAL!!!


CHECK OUT THE VIDEO BELOW FOR MORE DETAILS PLEASSSSSSE!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zG_SBw_mM18



EXAMPLE: 


America
by Allen Ginsberg

America I've given you all and now I'm nothing.
America two dollars and twentyseven cents January
17, 1956.
I can't stand my own mind.
America when will we end the human war?
Go f**k yourself with your atom bomb.
I don't feel good don't bother me.
I won't write my poem till I'm in my right mind.
America when will you be angelic?
When will you take off your clothes?
When will you look at yourself through the grave?
When will you be worthy of your million Trotskyites?
America why are your libraries full of tears?
America when will you send your eggs to India?
I'm sick of your insane demands.
When can I go into the supermarket and buy what I
need with my good looks?
America after all it is you and I who are perfect not
the next world.
Your machinery is too much for me.
You made me want to be a saint.
There must be some other way to settle this argument.
Burroughs is in Tangiers I don't think he'll come back
it's sinister.
Are you being sinister or is this some form of practical
joke?
I'm trying to come to the point.
I refuse to give up my obsession.
America stop pushing I know what I'm doing.
America the plum blossoms are falling.
I haven't read the newspapers for months, everyday
somebody goes on trial for murder.
America I feel sentimental about the Wobblies.
America I used to be a communist when I was a kid
I'm not sorry.
I smoke marijuana every chance I get.
I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses
in the closet.
When I go to Chinatown I get drunk and never get laid.
My mind is made up there's going to be trouble.
You should have seen me reading Marx.
My psychoanalyst thinks I'm perfectly right.
I won't say the Lord's Prayer.
I have mystical visions and cosmic vibrations.
America I still haven't told you what you did to Uncle
Max after he came over from Russia.

I'm addressing you.
Are you going to let your emotional life be run by
Time Magazine?
I'm obsessed by Time Magazine.
I read it every week.
Its cover stares at me every time I slink past the corner
candystore.
I read it in the basement of the Berkeley Public Library.
It's always telling me about responsibility. Business-
men are serious. Movie producers are serious.
Everybody's serious but me.
It occurs to me that I am America.
I am talking to myself again.

Asia is rising against me.
I haven't got a chinaman's chance.
I'd better consider my national resources.
My national resources consist of two joints of
marijuana millions of genitals an unpublishable
private literature that goes 1400 miles an hour
and twenty-five-thousand mental institutions.
I say nothing about my prisons nor the millions of
underprivileged who live in my flowerpots
under the light of five hundred suns.
I have abolished the whorehouses of France, Tangiers
is the next to go.
My ambition is to be President despite the fact that
I'm a Catholic.
America how can I write a holy litany in your silly
mood?
I will continue like Henry Ford my strophes are as
individual as his automobiles more so they're
all different sexes.
America I will sell you strophes $2500 apiece $500
down on your old strophe
America free Tom Mooney
America save the Spanish Loyalists
America Sacco & Vanzetti must not die
America I am the Scottsboro boys.
America when I was seven momma took me to Com-
munist Cell meetings they sold us garbanzos a
handful per ticket a ticket costs a nickel and the
speeches were free everybody was angelic and
sentimental about the workers it was all so sin-
cere you have no idea what a good thing the
party was in 1835 Scott Nearing was a grand
old man a real mensch Mother Bloor made me
cry I once saw Israel Amter plain. Everybody
must have been a spy.
America you don't really want to go to war.
America it's them bad Russians.
Them Russians them Russians and them Chinamen.
And them Russians.
The Russia wants to eat us alive. The Russia's power
mad. She wants to take our cars from out our
garages.
Her wants to grab Chicago. Her needs a Red Readers'
Digest. Her wants our auto plants in Siberia.
Him big bureaucracy running our fillingsta-
tions.
That no good. Ugh. Him make Indians learn read.
Him need big black niggers. Hah. Her make us
all work sixteen hours a day. Help.
America this is quite serious.
America this is the impression I get from looking in
the television set.
America is this correct?
I'd better get right down to the job.
It's true I don't want to join the Army or turn lathes
in precision parts factories, I'm nearsighted and
psychopathic anyway.
America I'm putting my queer shoulder to the wheel.




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Date: 6/13/2012 3:35:00 AM
CERTAINLY!!! Well,To each his own!
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:40:00 PM
IF YOU CLICK THE LINK ABOVE YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I MEAN....
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:38:00 PM
IF YOU CLICK THE LINK ABOVE YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I MEAN....
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:27:00 PM
With all due respect,vulgarity and sexuality is all apart of life. Both should be expressed if felt.We get sad and we write poetry about it.We get happy and write poetry about it.We get horny/sexually aroused or furious,so why cant we write about that as well.Yet we muffle our originality and emotions/experiences because of audience.Now tell me are you free.Or are you trying to please every body.While your trapped in a cage.
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:00:00 PM
Be free, also polish that freedom. Being yourself doesn't me there is no right or wrong. If I come upon vulgarity I will immediately cease reading and think twice about ever coming back to a poet, the same with sexual matter. So I say exercise freedom responsibly. I love Shakespeare, every time I read him I am inspired to write something new.
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Date: 6/12/2012 5:00:00 PM
ELLIOT., Streams of free thought....pure joy! Jimbo
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:06:00 PM
Don't get me wrong, its OK to be inspired by what you read but still hold on to self!!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:03:00 PM
Your absolutely right Chris. I made this blog ,so every one can understand the significance of allowing their personality and originality to pour.Not to be restricted and concerned by the poetry you read,trying to fit the norm.To many people try to sound like what they read.Falling under the impression that your poetry should sound like all the other poetry you read. Scratching out your originality and personality is the worst.
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Date: 6/12/2012 6:22:00 AM
HEY! LSD was one hell of a good sensory INPUTER? OKIES Ruben you're on
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:41:00 PM
Certainly Chris, I think Allen is original and eccentric.I heard one of his poems,that he wrote under the influence of L.s.d. LOL IT WAS BEYOND AMAZING !!! OVERALL ONE SHOULD NEVER BE ANYONE BUT THEMSELVES!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:31:00 PM
THANKS for the KIND words and WARM visit Gail!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:22:00 PM
LOL I WAS NEVER TIMID JUST SKEPTICAL DEAR FRIEND!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:21:00 PM
Thank YOU RUBEN O,YOUR ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:17:00 PM
It sounds like a good rant to me. could have been written in 2012!! To each his own, that's all I have to say, Elliot! We write and we read what we enjoy in this life, and like the song says, "I gotta be me!"
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:32:00 PM
NO Allen is not my idol,but I love the message he conveyed,very well in the video.Pay close ear to his words!!! CLICK THE LINK ABOVE!
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:27:00 PM
Quite a rant and not a poetic vehicle in sight ;)..is Ginsberg your idol? Shakespear loved a good rant too it just sounds different in old english...Light & Love [Actually Chris sounds like Allen!! Who says there is no reincarnation!]
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:22:00 PM
The only thing I am good at is being me. Although I am not too bad at a few other things, like my kids. My kids are great. At least to me. Thanks.
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:38:00 PM
First of all, that is a DEEP poem some people may cringe at but the truth just feels SO good! Second of all, I see the point that you were trying to get off (in BOLD WHITE letters) <3
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