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Absent

The wind tells a story we can not understand. We know the number of many but not the grains of sand. Nature is so similar to the creation of man. Only if we can be as peaceful and humble as they can. This poem is small but very little will understand. Except for the man who contemplates the nature of the land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/3/2013 12:18:00 PM
Just a few words can deliver a good message. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 11/2/2012 1:29:00 PM
Very sufficient of words, in A small package, here, Elliot welcome back, from wherever you where...... Xoxo Carma
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:32:00 PM
Welcome back fam!! Love this small piece here.
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Date: 10/9/2012 9:26:00 AM
A poem that I have overlooked, glad I found it today Elliott. It is a poem that I have read with pleasure, thank you. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2012 4:53:00 PM
I understand Elliot,wonderfully written,lets keep promoting peace,love,unity,one love for a better world
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:50:00 PM
nice Sandy
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:05:00 PM
This is a breath of fresh air and as peaceful- love it, thank you Brenda : )
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:33:00 PM
WOW! This is very well said and very well done. Thanks for sharing and welcome back. Lucy
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:18:00 AM
Great to read a new poem from you, and a great return. Soup mail.
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:01:00 AM
Hi Elliott Brilliant coming back. just another grain, Kathy
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Date: 9/29/2012 10:06:00 PM
Thank you ALL I MISSED YOU GUYS MUCH!!
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Date: 9/29/2012 8:14:00 PM
Hi Elliot, where have you been?? Missing your young persona here on the soup. Hold up, let me get back to your poem. I think your opening line is a beautiful picture, in which reminds me of all the colors the wind can paint and we can't see. A true absent feeling to he who takes more than one can grant... enjoyed your poem..pd
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