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Below is the poem entitled RUM VERSION OF MY DRUNKEN ENEMY which was written by poet Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I WasSS FAllingGG asleePPP
I fElLLL AsleEpPPP deepPPPp
alooffF anD dEEEEep intoOOO
a dEEEEEep mirrorRrR of sleepPP 
I gaZeD DeEEEep intoOO A
MirrOOr anD Had a dReam

I saw mY FriEnd mY
besT friendDD I rememBBer
hE saiIId i'llLLL beEE with uU untilLLL
TThe eNd therE are timesSS
He lUred mEE to the liOnsSS deN
theRRre areEE timesSS he savVVed mEEe
fRom the lioOOns dDenNN is thaT aHHHH
frFFiend  I Guesss HE IS MY ENEMY TOO bUUUUut latelYY 

HEee ForgetsSSS me bEEsets me uPsetSSs 
mEE anDD setSSS meEE in perplexXXed
placesSS he forgetsSS me and lets
me makE MMMMistakes DAT neveR

I cleanNN upPP HHHisSS messS

HEE placesSSS blaMMme heEE pointsSS
fingerSSs aTt otHers forRR thHHe
scaresSS onNN hisSSS facCCe aNd forRR thHHe
tasTe OOOOf bloOOOd iN hisSS mouUUth
hE obfuscateSSSSs anD negatesSSSSSS 
hisSSS mistakesSSSSSS heEE inflatesSSSSSSS anotheRRS 
wiIIIth blamMMe itsSS a shamMMMe

HEEE isSS mMY friendDD soOO I I I WHY I coveRRRr hisSS shamMMMMe aAAgain anD aAAgaiNNNN

HeEEE forgetsSS meEE besetSSSs meEEE UUpsetsSSS 
meEEE anD setsSSS meEE inNNN perpleXXxeD
placesSSS heEE forgetSSS mEEE anDDD letSSSs
meEEE maKKke mistakesSSS that neverRR

HeEEE chasSSSed meEEE witH a swWWWord 
HeEE trieD toOO chokeEE meEE wIIth aA
bOb wiRRreD corD In mirrorsSS dreamMMM
I screamMMM lord killLLLLL myYYYYY EnemyYYYYY

FroOOm heavenNN God begaAAAAn toOO

BoOoMmm        -  heEE shotTT hIim in the leg
BOOOMmm               -   heEE shoTTt hiIIm in the arm
BOoOMmm     ---                       heEE shotT hiIIm in the guUUt
BOOoMmm                 -                heEE shoTt hiIm in the heaD
MyYY Enemy is deaD
SuddEEnly I appear at 
HeavensSS gate uhHHH oOOh
I waAAs myYYY 

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  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:44:00 AM
    please check your soup mail. Chas

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:27:00 PM
    YyYoOoUuU MmMaAakKkeEe MmMeEE fFFeEeeeELll DdDrRruUuNnNKkk!! : ) Ruben

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:21:00 PM
    thiSSss IIsssS gGReeeattttttt,hadddd mmEE COUNTING letterssssss...