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Sand Castle

Gentle sonic of piano and violin guides our dance connected eyes in trance in stance of love the lord smiles above connecting our love free the doves of heaven concealing the moment with peace my soul flares with each step we step side to side spin and glide tingle,melt, form and sculpt brightness in soul and mind vanishing in rays of romance appearing on the bay of happiness playing in the sands of time,giggling as the tides collide before our eyes sand castles formed in eternal connection king and queen on sand in castle mending tender love the castle never falls,it never fades painted in golden hues,when the tides come to wash it away in our hearts it will for ever stay,every gain bonding our sand castle everlasting , darling bring your best bucket bring your best scoop we will build a city of sand on beach as I beseech your wetness and distract your sand castle in the making the dawn sets as we wet the sand we have made our sand castle of love. By: Elliott Bowe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/25/2012 1:12:00 PM
Oooo... such imagery.. I like it... Terry (and thanks for your kind comments)
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Elliott!! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Elliott xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:28:00 AM
Elliott congrats on your wiin..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:23:00 PM
You always have a way with words, Elliott. Very nice.
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
enchanting read!
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