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Below is the poem entitled THIS WORLD IS CRAZY which was written by poet Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Life is crazy far to crazy many people have eyes but they cant see many people have hearts but they can't feel many people have the cure but they don't use it.The flesh they rather abuse it knowledge they misuse it.You never understand the rain until you walk through it.They rather watch many suffer and prescribe false medication and watch them go through it.Why do they do it?We all have dreams and we try to pursue it.I say together we can do it but others step on heads just to do it and those are the ones that most likely win, those who sin.Those who sit back and grin when the arrows rain down on them .I wish I stayed in the womb and never crawled out.I would have held on to every organ.I swear those doctors would have never ever got me out.Send a message to the roses tell them to never bloom because the moment they bloom there  beauty will be born in doom and die far to soon.Look the gardener he is going to cut their stem and steal the beauty from them,another lost gem.As for me they try to defeat me delete and beat me but I stand strong I will last long in the rough winds and when the tornadoes come in and when the demons rush in because their here on earth killing us slowly and there contaminating the spiritual and religious leaders that claim to be holy.Holy water dose not work on those demons don't make your self look stupid and to restore earths love we need more than cupid in the worlds veins flow venomous fluids.We say we love but we hate we say we live but without fate we say jesus we need you but get to church late but wait we try to regulate but some how its far to late I bet GOD already closed the gate its sad to say it.We hide and run in all the wrong  places, stand only in the power of the lord and tie your shoe laces. Some have money and think they have it all some have college degrees and think they know it all but if you don't have GOD you don't have sh!t at all you stand and you fall yet he will answer when you call.I learned the hard way it was never easy you ever woke up and had nothing to eat you ever got dressed and knew exactly what you were going to wear because you only had one thing to wear and only had a couple pairs of under wear and you put it on with a couple of tears. In this world you have to struggle to be understood and to be somebody or should I say be apart of the norm which I don't understand because I came out of a woman just like you and we will equally be six feet under me and you..

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 3:06:00 PM
    it is crazy an it seems like no matter what u say it dont phase them, they dont c.even if they no the consequences even if their heart tells them no.. there already so driven to put us to an end.mostly worried bout one feeling right now in the moment.riskin our future cause they dont wanna let go but god knows it. the more of your poems i read the more i like.. cause i can relate an tho we may feel differently it makes u feel better knowing some people out there still care a little too

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:31:00 AM
    man, you really squeeze the poetic juice.. daring write so feisty, elliot.. keep the pen gliding!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:23:00 PM
    wow what an incredible write!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:13:00 PM
    Elliott, I love this..especially the way you end your poem with an awesome explanation... I can't believe I missed this one the way where is The Scribe... Tell him hi...always the poet destroyer...

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 4:29:00 PM
    Hang tough Oh passionate writer, hang tough, big hugs, vie

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Together my friend we can all make it sane! Peace and many blessings my friend.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:28:00 PM
    very nice rap. Enjoyed the rhyme. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 2:49:00 PM
    wow Elliot what a wonderful journey,great write