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Lust Versus Love

We forget lessons learnt in moments of bliss. Our minds wiped clean with a passionate kiss. To attain something called love we take a risk. You indulged in lust and lost your focus. I fell into a trap with out even knowing. I accepted dark glazed with light ,tempted by the glowing. Lust never helped my heart and its growing. The juices of your genital was the only thing flowing. You see lust and love are to different things. Lust unfurls the condoms ring. Love unfurls a wedding ring. I want more than lust. I needed your love loyalty and trust. Thus that's were the fuss started with us... You wanted my flesh,I wanted your soul. I guess that's why two different stories were told

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/24/2012 8:23:00 PM
Elliott, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 9/28/2012 7:01:00 PM
WOW! I really like that. Let the truth be told and u was bold.
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Date: 6/22/2012 6:41:00 PM
This truly unfolded The TWO DIFFRENCES OF STORIES OF LUST VERSES LOVE...TERMENDOUS SUPERB ELLIOT!!! Hugs!!!!
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:02:00 PM
A splendid poem, Elliot, compraing lust and love. I like the line 'you wanted my flesh, I wanted your soul'. Thanks for Congratulating me on the win of my poem 'The Wound'. God Bless You. -Mohammad
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:23:00 PM
Body and soul go hand in hand : ) love Elizabeth
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 6/19/2012 7:19:00 PM
Flesh will decay soul will forever stay...
Date: 6/19/2012 4:54:00 PM
This sounds too real Elliot..an excellent write from your soul!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:36:00 PM
she needs your body,you want her heart,two different stories,two different parts,lol,I loved it Elliot
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:25:00 PM
Nice! Reads like a life story...
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