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The Drunkenpen Reality

We are equal in blood and fleshed Equal like sun and moon,like may or june We are equal like hands connected in the sky equally fly in the sky equal birds fly by in the infinite equal painted image, on canvas,we are the same,no one has a higher or supreme name only the blood of jesus can bare that name so tell me your name or tell me again, why do your think different in our equal flesh who are you to judge the fence standing tall or short who are you to judge a color black or white,ok and if sooo then tell me your judgement of day and night and then tell me the difrence of black and white I bet you would tell me: OH ok I appoligze yourr wright were equal were equal humans walking separated paths don't judge me yet untill the lord judges us we are equal inflesh and blood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 8:37:00 PM
Wow! This is THE FAMOUS DRUNKEN FORMAT?....Well, no wonder the screen is s-P-I-n-n-InG ! (quik! Grab me a trashcan, I think I'm ge-Tti-ng SiC-K!) Hey Elliot! I really like this newer form...I will give it a try!...please,....could u call me a CaB?...lol...
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Date: 5/5/2012 3:40:00 PM
This is the DruNken PeN format... THANK YOU
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Date: 5/5/2012 3:34:00 PM
excellent points Elliott and so aptly written and stated clearly for the reader.. an amazing portfolio of perfection luv..
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