Springs Fashion Show

Naked trees,dressed by springs fashion. Birds seek refuge in the sleeves of trees. Warm breeze run up the trees sleeves. Feathers are cleaned by a brush of wind. Spring gives birth to a clean look. The best designer the world could have. Springs fashion show my eyes must have.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/29/2012 6:18:00 PM

Makes me want to go shopping and get with the times. All our trees are putting on new dresses and look beautiful! Loved the scenery here Elliot! :)

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/29/2012 3:07:00 AM

Good title. You have drawn the picture and made us feel the wind, hear the birds and see the colors. Now if we could only smell the flowers with all their pretty colors it would be complete. One of your better poems. Huggs TLee

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2012 1:43:00 AM

hi Elliot! I sure enjoyed your take on spring here, and how you viewed it as a fashion show :D! Very cool how you did that and wonderful imagery you put in as well :D! Thanks for passing by my poem :D

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 4/28/2012 10:24:00 AM

You couldn't have picked a better title, so FITTING! I love how the birds refuge in the sleeves of trees;) Nice image!