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I love you Cinderella look at how you work so hard I wouldn't give you the glass footwear but I would surly give you the world and heaven above I can see you in the clouds,I will spin you on the clouds until rose peddles rain off of your pink beauteous immaculate dress as I bless you with the best you have been taken out of me you are my rib we are one soul mates breathing in heaven adam and eve for you I wear my heart on the sleeve of my soul together we are whole storys of bliss untold the times you let me unfurl in you like love notes burnt in sensual Erotic ecstasy In your castle you lay next to me in dream lands of ecstasy while your supple skin caresses the sensitive parts of me in streams of heavenly fluff as you blush I gently defeat your queen and diamond with a hand of king and ace as I move fast paste through your moist inner embrace face to face gazing into bond fires of fire works Honey you are my Cinderella......

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Date: 5/16/2012 7:57:00 PM
This is beautiful Elliott.. you painted a beautiful picture with words.. i love it... smiles... chiquita
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Date: 5/13/2012 11:43:00 AM
I THINK EVERY WOMAN WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A MAN LIKE YOU TO WRITE HER POEM AS YOU DO,THANK YOU ELLIOTT,IVY
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Date: 5/13/2012 3:44:00 AM
love the imagery Elliot, the theme, and the flow, in fact an excellent poem, really enjoyed this read. harry
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