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Stand tall even when the stars fall In every dream there is a lock the key berried in reality keep digging keep digging don't ' stop keep climbing keep climbing to the top and hope you never drop. If you do don't you ever stop. If the ticking makes you nervous throw away the clock. If the shoes don't fit throw away the socks happiness is a shoe compromise to make it fit when you MAKE IT FIT enjoy every bit of it. Some say life is good some say life is ****! I say you get what you make out of it . Weather the storm. Stay calm. Wipe the sweat off of your palms. Patiently defuse your bombs and hope to find bliss in futures arms. Shaking. Breaking. Bare the undertaking. There is a new day in the making. Drunken pen. Drunken poet. How drunk can I be? When life influenced sober men to be more drunk than me. Though my pen drunk it vomits the sober things in me. Breath even when there's no air look for the good in the bad the glad in the sad make them question why your not mad many things come many things go many things are dim but many things glow appreciate what you have and go with the flow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/18/2013 7:16:00 AM
you walked the straight line and didn't miss a step, you passed the breathalyzer test,keep vomiting great poems likes these lol,great write Elliott,keeping this one
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:41:00 PM
Wow!!!.I'm speechless. <3
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:00:00 PM
Nice to see your new poem Elliot,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/20/2012 11:20:00 AM
Your sensitivity makes you very special! Light & Love
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Date: 11/5/2012 9:29:00 AM
Your style so unique and defined, raises my eyebrow with every read, your dirty little fingers, stupendous Elliot,,,,, fantastic write going in favs.... Carma xoxo
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Date: 11/5/2012 6:16:00 AM
nicely written Elliott....you went with the flow........
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Date: 11/5/2012 5:42:00 AM
Oh, I love it, Elliott. Welcome back. Haven't heard from you in a while. That is an awesome take that one can have. Great job. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 11/5/2012 3:10:00 AM
I MAKE IT FIT enjoy every bit of it. - Well done Elliott !!! Have a beautiful day, with lots of smiles ... oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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