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Artillery Rain

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Artillery Rain

~Perfect Rain~

I can see!
All the tribulations around
A rage against the burning wind
Nobody hears the crackling sounds in my voice
Everybody avoids to feel the smoke hidden within
A rain so deep it burns all the enamel off my skin
A rain that cut my soul in half
Two piece that will never entwine or merge down my dragon path
I feel this eternity has no ending blaze
Trigger happy rain, extinguishing a bonfire around my rose.

I will sleep under the artillery stars tonight
With the perfection of my fiery crystal lava teardrops
Washing the ashes of my face,
Suppressing the overwhelming fear
Knowing no one will ever, "BLAME IT ON THE RAIN!" 
As long as the torch keeps loading another artillery round.


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  1. Date: 5/29/2014 5:20:00 PM
    Hi Linda, as always you attract the attention straight off with your Interesting powerful write. Your words so full of emotion they pull the heart In one direction then the other. You put so much feeling Into what you write. Your words never show any fear. There Is always a high content of emotion and It rises as the piece flows. You always tell It from the heart and no one can ask for more. Keep smiling and let the Love flow. Have a good day. Catch you later....MIKE.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 11:55:00 PM
    A heartfelt piece, my mistress! Big congrats on your fine win!!! Hope you are doing fine there you are.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 4:19:00 PM
    Good morning my dearest sis! Biggest a.m hugs! Stopping by to read once again this stellar write of yours & winning masterpiece. Big congratulations my dearest sis & bff! biggest hugs! I can't stay long here at soup yet 'cuz I've to go to school an hour later. I'll just come back 1 of these days. I also came to send my lines for our collab thru your soupmail. Hope it's ok w/ u. Pls. b patient in editing pls. TYSM! Tc! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 6:56:00 AM
    Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, PD

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 10:06:00 PM
    So this captures what your feeling? You got too many fans. Congrads.

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 4:17:00 PM
    This the first time reading your poems. I think, actually I know I want read more. This is so intense. Unfortunately I do not think the world will change. Congrats on the win. Ron

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 1:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your win PD...

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 12:17:00 PM
    Congratulations for winning another spot in poetry contest!!!! take care always...and I'll wait for your BIG revenge here in PSoup.. you'll be forever my "most favoritepoet"... ---->>>>godspeed!!!!! __Aiyah___;)

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 5:06:00 AM
    Linda: Congratulations on your great performance and participation in my contest "Impress me III". :) G.

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 2:50:00 AM
    Pls.. Reload your poetical artillery units.. you're missed here. This poem is one among many pieces of evidence for that. > 7 Anyway BIG congrats a BIG win. Warmest and most sincere greetings from the Netherlands. Elly

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 12:55:00 AM
    A very power piece this is! Great pulsation with emotions that sip deep into the cores of our hearts!

  1. Date: 2/7/2014 7:35:00 PM
    Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Deep, do these just roll out of your head or do you have to work at them, I really need to know. Take care, Richard. Have just typed the code in and its KNKW, eerie

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:03:00 PM
    I'll be back to this, I have not read it, just looking for somewhere to congratulate you on your 9th place win in the dream contest lol, Thought you might like to see my wicked side lol, I see you shaking your head. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Excellent piece enjoyed a lot. My favorite poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:16:00 AM
    I really like this one, Linda. It is full of momentum and energy and reads kind of like a very passionate manifesto. Good work!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:45:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:46:00 PM
    The continuity of pain and pleasure- battling for the right to be happy and inspired is what this write means for me PD. - how being ignored, or completely misunderstood can fuel a yearning in us for a stronger self awareness and self respect - 'Extinguishing a bonfire around my rose...' a Master's signature!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:20:00 AM
    i understand this poem nice job no more rain over here lol

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:46:00 AM
    wow, deep - love this awesome write, PD