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Oh Mother

Mother I love you,come close allow me to hug you from your womb I came you embraced me as you whispered my name,I love you,you were the first woman to say my name with love while thanking the lord above for giving you a baby and shedding his love from above,my love,your motherly with heavenly touch oh how I love you so much,I appreciate your knowledge after doing wrong I hope you will live long to guide me along mom I promise I will help you stand strong when you get old,I will fold your sheets and help you eat and rub your feet as you sit on your rocking seat I will even read you the bible before you sleep, Oh mother oh beautiful mother,at this present time you are young and I am to thank you for all the things that you do thank you happy mothers day ok.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2012 2:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Elliott. Beautiful piece, my friend. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/16/2012 1:24:00 AM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/16/2012 12:10:00 AM
ELLIOTT, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/15/2012 5:51:00 PM
Priceless!!
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/14/2012 11:59:00 PM
Oh, Elliott, *tear* what a prescious write this is!!!Such a tender heart...and loving son...your mother is blessed! Thank you for sharing ... this wonderful tribute to your mother...God Bless You, dear one...big hugs, love ya , deb
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/14/2012 9:41:00 PM
Dear Elliott, A Masterpiece, I read this and see YOUR LOVE for YOUR Mother and Her LOVE for YOU. I bet You brought a Tear of Joy to YOUR Mother's eye. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER,YOUR Eternal Liege... Harry Soup Mail Call in a few minutes I have to write Vie
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/13/2012 8:46:00 PM
A lovely heartfelt dedication! Beautiful
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 5/16/2012 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/13/2012 1:08:00 PM
This is a stunning dedication to your mom Elliott.. I hope you share this with her ;) Wilma
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 5/13/2012 11:38:00 AM
Dear Elliott,,God bless you ,you are perfect son any mother could wish for,your words have brought tears to my eyes,tears of you,that world has a such a good man as you are,thank you ,Ivy
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 5/16/2012 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you have been touched by my sincere poem...
Date: 5/13/2012 10:11:00 AM
this is so wonderful. I would LOVE to get a poem like this from my son. But this is not something he would ever write or even think about me (and I know I must be older than your young mother). Your mother is such a lucky woman .
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:47:00 PM
Thanks a bunch....
Date: 5/13/2012 9:41:00 AM
"Ohhh, I love it, Elliott. Such a wonderful poem. Hope your mother will live long and all her days are happy days. Happy Mother's Day. Love, Toquyen"
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:46:00 PM
Thanks a bunch....

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