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Blog Posted by Len Gasun: 4/24/2013 11:32:00 AM

Hi, my loving sis Linda & the rest for the game! If I'm not sleepy, I will post all, lol ;)). I'll hold the rest first but this is one of the worst poems I have. I wrote this poem for fun and submitted as an entry for a contest as if without turning back (no rereading, editing, thinking) ;)))). Perhaps, one of the reasons was, I was afflicted by a flu when I wrote it, lol. I have more but I will also post it again next time. I got a problem in copying & pasting it from my word/PS;)). I needed to type again the poem on my blog.

My Stupid Boy Friend

Tonight you go with me under the blue moonlight
Please do it sweetheart if you love me tight

I'll wait for you at your back gate
Go out right away when everyone is in bed

These were the last text messages of my stupid boy friend
Who wants to elope without minding the consequence

Note: A couplet with only 1 pair of rhymes & written just for fun

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Poet Destroyer
A

Date: 4/25/2013 10:13:00 AM

Thank you sweet Leo.... for reading my bad poem 3 times...LOL.... hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 4/25/2013 10:19:00 AM

:))). Yap, my dearest sis. I even read it aloud. ;( but still..... i like it.;(

Abdulhafeez
Oyewole

Date: 4/24/2013 5:33:00 PM

I don't think yours is that bad or worse...if compare to one of mine. See what I initially wants to hand for a contest Which I think it won't be hard to find out who's and what's contest it is by its beginning phrase... this is it... Ijust found out my true friend/ I just found out she means a lot to me./ I just realize she is like a rose/ I don't notice her beauty until it's fade/ I just realize you are the right woman/ to be the mother of my children./ I've just found a companion /i can confide in at all time.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/25/2013 10:15:00 AM

Hi, my dear friend AO. Reading your poem now I think is not in ;)). I'm reading it now and not that bad, only the part that which says, I don't notice her beauty until it's fade. ;)) I went to your poetry page and try to find it; but I can't. Will you give me the title please? Thank you so much.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:56:00 PM

Hmmmmm... really? But, for me it's worst. Wait, my dear friend AO. I'll come back. I've worse than this. lol . Yours, ok.. let me see again later if you will get IN the contest or not. ;)) I'll be back. Thanks!

Painted
Hunter

Date: 4/24/2013 1:23:00 PM

Hmmmm...any poem with the words, text message and stupid boy friend has GOT to be awful...;)

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:42:00 PM

See. Thanks also my dearest sis! ;)))))

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:38:00 PM

I also agree. Thanks my dear friend Caleb! :))))

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/24/2013 2:17:00 PM

Lol...so true

Suzanne
Delaney

Date: 4/24/2013 12:58:00 PM

elopement should be under blue moonlight...a true winner especially the back gate bit lol hahahahahahahahaha

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:37:00 PM

ha ha ha ha. thanks my dear Suz!

Poet Destroyer
A

Date: 4/24/2013 11:57:00 AM

Ooo.Leo....this is bad... not as bad as the consequences, if u go through with it. . .lol. .lol

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:35:00 PM

Good morning my dearest sis! Oh, really? Hmmnnn.. Well, as I've mentioned, I've some more. I'll post it when I come back tonight. lol. Thank you so much!

Roy
Jerden

Date: 4/24/2013 11:57:00 AM

Considering the topic of recent blogs, maybe I'll start a rotten tomato poetry contest... Old poems only, worst poems win. What do you think?

Len Gasun
Date: 4/24/2013 5:57:00 PM

;))) Thanks my dear friend Roy.

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