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Blog Posted:4/19/2011 10:21:00 PM

You want my penitence, my contrition, my remorse? You don't care to listen to anything I have to tell you because you think I'm lying, I have no credibility. You want me to prove something to you that had NOTHING to do with you in the first place? Why don't you prove to me that I AM lying about something else. Since you've stated rather arrogantly that you KNOW I am. Until you can prove that I am lying abt other things, I suggest you learn the discrepanciesbetween PROOF and OPINION. And the next time you meet someone like me, be careful when you go to make a fool out of them in front of your friends. Sometimes the very swordyou pick up to cut down someone else is double-edged.
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:19:00 AM
I have no idea towards wot and who you are referring to here, but it sure sounds personal. I understand the sword analogy. I live by the sword, so one day, I shall too, die by the sword. So is life.
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:57:00 PM
I too have no idea Marcus of what you speak yet I do know it's best to write a soup mail to them. Maybe neither of you are lying just both of you have a direct perspective? Light & Love
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:40:00 PM
I'm wondering who caused you such angish...
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Date: 4/20/2011 11:21:00 AM
huh? is this something that should have gone to someone directly in soup mail?
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