Notes About The Poem

As shared by Mark Toney an  Elfchen is an eleven-word poem written across five lines. It’s also called an “Elevenie.” Elf means “eleven” in German, and -chen at the end of a German word indicates diminutive size and endearment. So, an Elfchen is a little poem of eleven words in five lines, as follows: Line 1: One word; Line 2: Two words; Line 3: Three words; Line 4: Four words; Line 5: one word. Thanks Mark. 

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Crane Dreams

Crane Autumn light Soft moonlit shadows Rippled at water's edge. Dream
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Maverick Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 5:32 AM
Just came to crane suZ..Iike sorta Just here for the beer, on the bird Scene if ya know what i mean.? Anyhow have a winfield..As that painter Bloke used to say anyway..Anyhow or anyway I guess I'll say g'day.)
Velasco Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 7:06 AM
A delicate and tranquil piece,.your imagery captures both grace and stillness, leaving the reader with a lingering sense of quiet reflection.
Rose  Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:39 PM
ever so beautiful to read, and see, :)
Greenhough Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 2:05 PM
I like the style and story of a crane at night. Nicely written.
Swan Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 5:59 AM
I love your poem and I love little poems - they fit in my head in one piece. Autumn, the time when the light changes - daylight and night-light on the ripples where the crane stands. You might like the Australian poem, 'The Crane' by John Shaw Neilson: 'The crane is my neighbour...he moves as the guest of the sunlight...' an old one (1938), but matching your theme. Poet ripples!
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August 27, 2025 at 5:45 PM
beautiful and captivating words. Wasn't familiar with this form but will have to try it. have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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