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Jill and Lucille

Jill and Lucille are two very hungry slugs
They often dine out at their local garden food hubs. 
Lettuce, flowers, fruits, sunflowers and beans
These are a few choices from these veggie canteens.

Some clues are noticed from a gardeners view
Slugs are not clever, they often leave one big clue.
Slime trails are generally very clear to see 
When they travel for food that they eat greedily.

Flowers without heads and partially eaten veg
It all looks a mess when a gardeners work has been wrecked.
But hedgehogs love slugs that are plump and juicy
That's when Jill lost her friend, who's nick name was Lucy.

Jill left the garden when her best friend became their snack
Near to a hill, is where she met her new friend Jack.
But as with all stories, they change over time
Snails morphed into humans and birthed the Jack and Jill rhyme.

But that is not the first or last of the Jill and Lucille tales
Many more will be published about their life in the Dales.
These girls will be as famous with modern songs for the young
Feminine nursery rhyme rights will never be outdone.

Copyright © Emilia James | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 11/26/2024 10:18:00 AM

I am sorry l missed your very creative, fun Jill and Lucille poem Emilia....a great tale my friend!! Debx
Date: 11/22/2024 11:24:00 AM

Very inventive take. Congrats on your win.
Date: 11/18/2024 12:28:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Jill and Lucille write again. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
Date: 11/18/2024 1:59:00 AM

I truly enjoyed this write, Emilia. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering! Charlie
Date: 11/7/2024 4:26:00 AM

I'll see them in new light now Emila, an enjoyable read. Tom
Date: 11/7/2024 1:48:00 AM

now you`ve done it, lol, the garden will be full of them now. I hope I don`t start naming them. your on a roll Emilia, keep them coming, you always make me smile. take care. Simon :-):-)
Date: 11/6/2024 3:15:00 AM

Those pesky slugs!! I have one somewhere in my kitchen! All i ever find is a silver trail, that leads to nowhere! A very clever and enjoyable read. This poem put a smile on my face.
Date: 11/4/2024 1:09:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun Jill and Lucille write. "Good Luck" if it is for the contest... Have a fun day writing away...............

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