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Special Girl

Special Girl

There was a girl who made me smile
I had felt feelings that I thought would last for a short while
As day passes by, my feelings grew strong
I wanted to confess because I can't take it any longer

I waited to see if my feelings would vanish
But the amount of pressure feels like a punish
I sacrificed a lot of time to see if my feelings would quit
But it never happened so I was tempted to do it

She is mysteriously alluring and amazing
Like the goddess of beauty, Aphrodite who is very pleasing
Her personality was beautiful as a princess
No wonder why she became my greatest weakness

She gave me pain that is greater than gunshot
And I experienced sorrow and sadness without getting caught
But that didn't stop me from not giving up without being accepted
Because I decided to commit to her without being interrupted

My love for her is genuine
For she is my medicine
I am as persistent as a weed
I will just keep coming back until I succeed.

Copyright © Patrick Viray | Year Posted 2018



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Lovely Girl

A lovely girl that was like a star was born, Who is as sweet as a sweet corn, She was the brightest out of them all, That was also alluring like the nightfall, She holds a warm smile that I cherish, And flames that will not perish, She sits silently with an enigmatic mind, Filled with thoughts that are kind, Under the beautiful moonlight, There she stands shining bright, Wearing such a beautiful dress, That left my mind such a mess, A beautiful scarlet rose was slowly given, That depicts my feelings which are smitten, By the special meaning of the flower That emits like the golden hour.

Copyright © Patrick Viray | Year Posted 2018


Book: Shattered Sighs