Whiffling Poems


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He said that it was brillig, but what did that word mean
And slithy is a word that I had never seen
If you gyre and gimble, what do you really do
I guess when in the wabe, you seek the meaning too.

Lewis was a master of words that were not real
He made you fear the Jubjub, and he made you feel
Like your very being, is a door without a latch
It takes bravery to shun the frumious bandersnatch.

We attack the world of words with a vorpal sword in hand
Verses, like the Tumtum tree, sprouting in the sand
And structure with rhyming can be a manxome foe
Whiffling and burbling, the flaming words will go.

Choosing careful phrases can bring a frabjous day
And poems not dead, like borogoves, find their mimsy way
While galumphing through the tulgey lines with uffish chortled joy
It makes me through and through a whiffling beamish boy

So Lewis paints a picture with unreal words so clear
The Jabberwock seems so real and something we should fear
Poetry is the art of words, with phrasing, tales and fun
Proceed carefully, and beware the Jabberwock my son.
Categories: whiffling, poetry, tribute, word play,
Form: Rhyme

Beneath a Bearded Tree

Beneath a bearded tree I sat
Expecting on a gaze,
When interview a headless hat
Came whiffling through the haze.

For laffs he wore a slight of grin,
And luck a charmless arm.
Four feathers grew upon his chin.
His steptwin was a farm.

Good Rooter with his tranquilize
Spread fat across the land.
To bleat the water from his cries
And polish up his hand.

‘Beware the Moo!’ A Cow called out,
His udders clothed in drag.
‘Beware its hook and pout-ful shout.
Its Moo-beams in a bag!’

Beneath a bearded tree I sat
Re-musing on the dayz.
When interview a stripy cat
Came whiffling through the haze.
Categories: whiffling, nonsense,
Form: Rhyme


Farrah, Bronze Huntress

fine, faintly flickering face,
 a goddess' gilded grimace;
  eyes sharp, slightly squinting,
   lips pursed, concentrating;
    arms strained, straight, steady,
     inch by inch, pulling in the cord,
      pushing away at the sturdy bow
       that bends so slowly in, arched.


deft fingers firmly clasp,
 but ever so lithely guide
  the lethal arrow's feather
   past her cheek near the ear;
    pulls hard, stretches taut
     and tense the bare bowstring,
      impatiently anticipating,
       savoring the inner, aching thrill;


waiting for just the right time,
 but waiting forever, it seems;
  the prized prey, still out there
   feeding freely on freedom still;
    her destiny, chiseled, shaped
     by her sculptor's whiffling whim,
      is to forever take a careful aim,
       but never to make the final kill!
Categories: whiffling, imagination
Form: Free verse

Whiffling Wonder

disarmed of perspective, mindless,
to this ancient forest I pay homage,

my senses soaked in misty meadows,
the dark-green carpets of its clearings,

as rough edges of leafy bough sway
and cut the blank blue of their only sky;


               with arms outstretched, I stand in awe,
               oblation to the wondrous wonders around,

               I stretch myself, hoping that I may become
               just like an artist's taut, transparent canvas

               on which no less than artless and artful truth
               may then be indelibly etched and painted;


                                         by allowing this inchoate enchantment
                                         to permeate the core of my whole being,

                                         in a light sense , I feel good having done
                                         something good, no matter how fleeting,

                                         for it whiffles away in the din of  subways,
                                         gnarled traffic and toxic smog of rat race city !
Categories: whiffling, nature, places, urban, may,
Form: Free verse

The Bronze Huntress

fine, faintly flickering face, 
  a goddess'  gilded grimace,
    eyes slightly squinting, 

      razor-sharp concentrating,
        lips pursed and puckered, 
          arm straining straight, steady,

            pushing away at the sturdy 
              bow that bends in, arched;


with deft fingers firmly 
  pinching,  lithely guiding
    the arrow's feather past 

      her cheek near the ear,
        she pulls hard, stretches 
          taut the bare bowstring,

            impatient, anticipating, she 
              flushes with an aching thrill,


itching  for a primal burst 
  of some pent-up emotion;
    but with the prey out there, 

      freely feeding on freedom still,
        her destiny, indeed, at her 
          sculptor's whiffling whims,

            is to forever take a careful aim, 
              but never to make the final kill !
Categories: whiffling, imagination, introspection, time,
Form: Tail-rhyme


Love Poem

O My Ariel, my angel, my love,
I wait below your window overnight.
Wind knocks at your window above,
giving me a helping hand, to my delight.

The waves of moonlight is wafting soft.
They are gushed from my lovesick heart.
Whiffling, rustling trees hail you aloft.
Open wide your window of joyful art.

Through the swaying branches of this tree,
I get glimpses of you weeping in solitude.
My heart aches for what the eyes can't see.
Bear a life with cheerfulness and fortitude.
Categories: whiffling, love,
Form: Rhyme

Russet Red Vision At the Edge of the Green Creek

Scabbard symbol enchanted flowers opal potion milky skin
Gold-embroidered  purple  robe , green eyes flashing stars.
Beautiful faintly beeswax smell in  village meadow chamber
Horse's necklace "clack! clack! clack" sleek coat bobbed tail.
Velvet  lined  rose queen , green tree snake salty evening air
Tea tree branch , topiary mazes ,  old Kingdom noonday sun.
Fresh  dawn ,  wood  ash ,  surrounding  woods,  veil  of mist
Twisting  and turning , sliding  and re-arranging  themselves
slender fingers pulled the needle back and forth on the loom
Nuzzling  against his face an eager lip/nostril  whiffling noise 
Ice  crystals  etched along  its blade felt  the glow of his spirit 
took a deep breath voice tiny siver bell with a high sweet note. 
Brightly  wrapped box  he suddenly smiled a number of times 
Wispy  tendrils of red curls straggled free of their satin ribbon
She paused to feed a thread of scarlet  into the pattern of blue.
They continued up the hill , beyond the ridge they saw the King
riding , his amber-coloured stallion charged ahead of his men
at the edge of the creek , green with ferns and rich moist moss.
Categories: whiffling, childhood, friendship, life, love,
Form: Verse
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