Untwining Poems | Examples


Silent Prayers

The hand comes out of the
rubble to throw
the musky odor
of a cross-legged
monk
under the ginkgo tree.

An apparition comes
outside the body of a fan-shaped snake;
ignites the wolf.
We were hungry,we were thirsty.
Untwining we went into the cave
for a snowgod. 

Tossing the coins 
in the water tank;
tying the thread onto a
ficus tree,
the weeping shepherd said-
I want nothing.





 Satish Verma
Categories: untwining, art,
Form: ABC

Taste of Freedom

Chains
Forged by you
Designed to hold me down
Loosening
Weakening

Your iron grip
That forced me to lye
To sit by your side
Unclenching
Relaxing

The web 
You cast around me
To make me stay 
Untwining 
Unwinding

Everything you've done
Broken, erased, destroyed
You have no more control
I run away to my first
Taste of freedom
Categories: untwining, lifeme, me,
Form: Quintain (English)


Smoken Crack

depths secrets twinded in the mind.
 broken hearted,putting pressure close behind.
 deep thinking,untwining the light of the dark.
 running close together putting a lighted path into sparks.
 fully opened to the back end of the cave.
 running  slowly but yet surely into different formatical waves.
  wild and ecliped forwards  like a rushing damn.
  picture slow movements like it was already been programed.
  gushing and poseing feeling,over the body ,yet to grow.
   shimering highlights in the eyes, what happens yet,you should know..
Categories: untwining, sympathy,
Form: I do not know?
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