Kiki Murdock Poet Quintain (English)

Taste of Freedom

Chains
Forged by you
Designed to hold me down
Loosening
Weakening

Your iron grip
That forced me to lye
To sit by your side
Unclenching
Relaxing

The web 
You cast around me
To make me stay 
Untwining 
Unwinding

Everything you've done
Broken, erased, destroyed
You have no more control
I run away to my first
Taste of freedom

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Vince Suzadail Jr. May 25, 2011 at 9:30 AM Congrats Kiki, on this courageous write being featured. Vince

Renee Kelly May 24, 2011 at 9:58 AM Very strong poem, Kiki. Looking forward to reading more by you!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2011 at 4:45 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Kiki

Cj Krieger May 23, 2011 at 9:19 PM Congratulations Kiki on a fine write, Best CJ

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 4:36 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kiki. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 8:01 PM Congrats Kiki on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. great piece to share with us all with luv..

Mourning Mist May 22, 2011 at 5:45 PM can i bookmark this poem so I can throw it in someones face later on? rofl hehe

Cory Long May 22, 2011 at 3:18 PM I liked the description you used.. nicely done cory