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We meandered along the cays in June
Our blistered feet untoughened, 
White with ooze and sand
Caring the least for nothing
Save taut sail and steady breeze
And good news from home.
Cap steered as rudder let
The clipper sensed his notion
While the mainsail bloomed above us
And billows tossed the ocean, 
We thought of dusk and port
And good news from home.
When our vessel slapped the shore
We went in search of life and laughter
And found our legs again, 
A time for jollying after
We talked of days ahead
And good news from home.

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Maimed

Your curiosity pulled
the poisoned dirk of loneliness
from the deepest chamber 
of my quaking heart.
With steady hand 
pressed to the open wound,
the healing process began
as wonder turned to love.

After washing away 
festering insecurities
then wrapping me 
in the gauze of your embrace,
you breathed into me 
new desire to subsist. 
Your devotion became 
an unguent balm.
Kissing my heart
made it well.

Now I wear an untoughened scar
capable of growing stronger
through days and nights 
of togetherness or gaping again
should the straight-bladed 
dagger of solitude 
be repositioned.
I tremble,
hold my breath,
in frightened anticipation,
loathing the thoughts
of lovelessness
cutting through me
again.

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