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["Windjammer" first appeared in Poetry online, The World's Largest Poetry Society, 2007. It was reprinted in my "Ashes on the Snow, Createspace, 2010.] 

Windjammer

We meandered along the cays in June
Our blistered feet untoughened, 
White with ooze and sand
Caring the least for nothing
Save taut sail and steady breeze
And good news from home.
Cap steered as rudder let
The clipper sensed his notion
While the mainsail bloomed above us
And billows tossed the ocean, 
We thought of dusk and port
And good news from home.
When our vessel slapped the shore
We went in search of life and laughter
And found our legs again, 
A time for jollying after
We talked of days ahead
And good news from home.

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Gaul Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Of course the form is good, repeating lines and all. As well, the rhyme is tight and light while it helps the story to tell. But most of all, I liked the salty talk, one can taste the seaside brine. When you've been to sea like you and me, it makes the waves all mine. Quite a fine sailor's song you fashioned here. Heave ho.
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Thanks for your encouraging words, Greg. I can tell you have been to sea!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love the ocean and miss it. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Ah, Paula. Thanks. Your visits always make me feel better.
Sikorski Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Milton it’s lovely with a unique title (which I am particularly fond of ..a great title!) You transported me there and I enjoyed the ride in sail boat ! Kim
Sikorski Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Sorry your sail boat. I can’t wait til I can get a new iPad ..cheers ! Kim
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