Unsurfaced Poems


Je Me Souviens

I could remember the bad days so clearly
like a newly opened wound
has more come to lay out upon us
with a trickling evil that stays unsurfaced
this day that the sun has come across
is it as disasterous as it was

I could remember th way to our hideout
where no one could find us
the path is wrought over with moss
will you lose your way
Im waiting here for you, alone
is it as disasterous as it was

I could remember the crash
shards of glass hurled to my eyes
the painful crush of metal on my back
the taste of blood in my mouth
everything grew silent around us
is it as disasterous as it was

I could remember the tombstone
a two word epitaph
"love and courage" it read, gray and bold
it's always what you lived by
now it's what I've lost
it is as disasterous as it was
Categories: unsurfaced, loss
Form: Free verse

White Fender Medium

Pure white with golden font
Millimeters numbered just right
Thick enough only for distortion
Smooth to the tongue
Held perfectly at my fingertips..
But it'll slide right down your throat
A pill of death for a musician

The lump stuck for hours
Breakfast food fights it down
To the acidic pit
Hopefully melting away
Releasing the inner toxin..
The beginning of a bad omen
I swallowed a White Fender Medium

Late night communications
The girl of my thoughts for weeks
Happy and comfortable
Accomplishing a beautiful feat
Secrets become unsurfaced
Everything that flourished is dead..
I swallowed a White Fender Medium

Cold weather ahead
Windows shattering at great times
Gusts of air paralyzing our bodies
Vacuum the sharp remnants
Frozen hands with an aching soul
These shards are just the beginning..
I swallowed a White Fender Medium

They were always special to me
A musician's charm of good fortune
Karma despises my weapon of choice
Instinctive feelings are nothing
Plastic, rounded triangle with letters engraved
So much for the lovely theme..
A Fender White Medium..

I swallowed that stupid guitar pick..
Categories: unsurfaced, music, sorry
Form: Free verse


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