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An Unrevised Poem About the Hate

Believe me - I am not the best Jew in the world
I have read AJ Heschel though 
Who marched with MLK
Nice to have peace between the black and Jewish communities
One of my first girl friends was an Afro American
She pretty
But we were both only 16
Recently I was "dumped " by a Jewish chick 
Well, she is not into poetry too much anyway
I am not Bilbo Baggins
Don't live in a hole in the ground
Perhaps I can find my soul - mate here is the Big Apple!!
Or perhaps not
Keep writing verse all you out there in the darkness!!!

An Unrevised Poem About Politics

Poetry does not have to be political to be good
But verse can change people's hearts about things
political 
In the good old USA the Democrats and Republicans are gearing up for the big 
battle
In the land of Israel elections take place tomorrow
Other lands have relatively free elections as we
Who will win?
How much does it matter?  
"Happy Days are Here Again" is the song of 
the great FDR days
Write a song or poem for you candidates 
you people reading this out in the darkness
Poltics can be annoying 
but it is a part of life in which I take an intrest
Do you out there? 
Let me know what you think! 
Soon the Jewish New Year will come
And after the the secular New Year will take place
Whatver you think of the political scene out there 
I send along my best wishes

An Unrevised Poem About Baseball

I watched as the Mets slammed the opposition 10 -2 
Been a fan for years
Played catcher for a little while as a kid
Watching sports is a great way to take your mind off
The terrible things we see in the news
Make a little money from writing
and check my stocks periodically 
Some people think ballplayers are overpaid
They all make more than the President does
But sports are good for male bonding
Any females who love sports poetry 
Please write me!


Another Unrevised Poem

Life is very short 
Shorter than we would wish for 
Find peace with your poems

An Unrevised Ode

After years of psychotherapy 
Same 
Man

Unrevised Reflection

We poets despise money 
That is what some people say and think
However despite being a poet 
I do play the scratch off lottery at times
I won $40 and more recently $10
I felt good 
As a poet should 
When counting his or her cash 
Won  by guile or work 
Almost came to an  end 
So peace and love is what I send 
Poetry won't make you rich 
And revising is such a ***** 
But  I send out these free verse lines
In the hope that at times 
You'll gaze at my verse 
And for better or worse 
You'll know what I think 
Poetry is safer than drink  
Should you encounter an ode 
of mine in the News 
Please give some thought
to what I have wrought 
You can appreciate it - even without any booze


A Short Unrevised Poem

Raining today 
   in the big apple 
  Yes, this metropolis is still here 
Despite the 
    fact 
that 
we 
have 
   been attacked 
Yes, the masses of people 
still long to visit 
this "Baghdad on the Hudson"
as O.Henry named it 
It is not Paris, Tel Aviv or London 
But it is the place 
   I call home 
Personally I think this city 
will survive ,flourish and grow

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