Unpatched Poems | Examples


For Edrei

My love, 
     Remember when I said I won’t write anymore for thee?

I was wrong.

My emotion was overflowing 
     That my heart cannot bare anymore.

Thy love for me 
      Was the sweetest and the truest I’ve ever felt.

It has a magic of powerful healing, 
      Which cures my dying soul,

But my love, 
      I guess it was just my soul that thou healed – 

The scar in my heart left unpatched –   
      Fearing me and making me doubt.

Yes, I’m in doubt, 
      But not of thy love for me,

But my love for thee.

I’m still a confused winged creature,
      Baffled on which land I should nest.

Thou can call me nonsensical -- 
      I guess I am,

Because I love thee yet I’ll leave
      To find a perfect patch for my scar,

So that when I’m perfectly cured
      I can see who I’m truly me.

Sorry.
Categories: unpatched, boyfriend, break up, confusion,
Form: I do not know?

Shattered Glass

I've been torn and broken apart,
I have no soul no more all I have
is emptiness. You have no idea what
I've been through but is not 
worse than others; my wall of
joy, peace, happiness and charisma is
gone and I'm referring to my
self-esteem, the pressure from expecting
so much out of me and not letting
me go ahead and grow up and experience 
life myself has finally cracked and fell 
into a thousand pieces like shattered glass.
There in this deep pit lies what
holds me together but it is too
dark to find the way and I will only
get lost deeper in the dark hole.
My heart has a hole unpatched and
unfixed and this black hole seems
infinite; the key held close to my
heart is the wrong key to open this
diary unlock the secrets hidden within
and beyond this shattered glass.
Categories: unpatched, sad, me,
Form: Dramatic Monologue


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