Unmaking Poems | Examples


Siren's Mirage

Tomorrow’s lullaby
in footnotes to Dylan
Tomorrow blistering
confronting the sun

Tomorrow lingering
while calling your name
Temptation disguising
what’s never to come

Tomorrow’s redemption
the present to ransom 
Tomorrow in voices
a chorus of ghosts

Tomorrow forgiving
each sin of unmaking
Tormenting each moment
—you treasure the most

(Dreamsleep: November, 2022)
Categories: unmaking, time,
Form: Rhyme

Tomorrow Unpromised

Where would we be
without the bomb
Was Einstein a savior
or devil aplomb
Our power the fire
all enemies dread
Till stealing its physics  
unmaking our bed

The world on the edge
of a looming abyss
Missiles entombing
a terrorist wish
Tomorrow unpromised
all time day to day
Eternity waiting
—forever to blame

(Saint David’s Pennsylvania: May, 2022)
Categories: unmaking, fate,
Form: Rhyme


Anonymous

Blossomed solitary, a flower unseen
Colors missed; hues ignored
Fragrances ne'er sniffed
Scattered into emptiness

By planters 'n florists 
Makers unmaking their creatures 
Leaving them derelict
Forlorn in a floral paradise

Alone inside a packed bouquet
Kindred flowers, strangers by design
Precious little to share 
Save for empty stares

© Alwi Shatry, All Rights Reserved.  February 24, 2020
Categories: unmaking, age, angst, character, confusion,
Form: Free verse

Her Logo

IT WAS SUPRISING TO HIM
HE DATED HER FOR MORE THAN A YEAR AND
WHEN SHE TOLD HIM SHE HAD MARRIED
NINE MONTHS BACK, HE STOOD SHOCKED
AND AMAZED.
SHE SMILED AS IF JIS FEELINGS WEREN'T TO BE HURT
OR AT LEAST BRUISED.
BUT IT DIDN'T STOP THEIR, SHE TOLD HIM SHE KNEW SHE WAS PREGANT
AND SHE THOUGHT HIM TO BE THE FATHER. IN ANY INSTANCE SHE'D EXPECT HIM TO TAKE CARE OF HIS CHILD AND TOLD HIM
HER HUSBAND HAD AGREED TO RAISE THE CHILD AS HIS.
SHE  THOUGHT IT WAS NESSACARY TO ADVICE HIM OF THE LIMITATIONS
SHE HAD PLACED ON HIM, AND GAVE REASON TO SUPPORT HER THEORY OF MALE EGO AND PRIDE.
HE THOUGHT SHE WAS CRAZY AND ASKED HER TO LEAVE. SHE MILED AND SAID I WILL CALL YOU IN THREE DAYS, WE CAN TALK THEN.
HE SAT ON THE SIDE OF HIS BED FOR HOURS, AND THE ONLY WORDS HE COULD COME UP WITH WERE
FROM ONE DAY THINKING SHE JUST LIKED HAVING COMPANY, TO THIS. EXTREME TO EXTREME: AND WONDERED WHO SHE RECEIVED ADVICE FROM AND WHAT GRIPE DID THE OTHERS WHO SUPPORTED HER HAVE AGAINST HIM.
SOMBOR THE UNMAKING OF THOSE WHO CONSPIRE TO MAKE NIGHTS TOMMORROWS FOR COUPLING. SHE WISHED HIM TO BE HER PAYDAY. AND NOW HE WAS FACED WITH HER DISTORTED WAYS OF ESTABLISHING EXSISTANCE.
Categories: unmaking, adventure, marriage, music, relationship,
Form: Lyric

Unmade

Prose… 
Has a room built in
For the reader
To crawl inside
And sleep

Maybe
More than one room,
Unmaking all beds
That the Poet 
  —has so carefully made

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)
Categories: unmaking, poetry, writing,
Form: Free verse


Orphan King

Estranged from the familiar
you made me by unmaking me
for getting tired too soon
of fostering 
like I was
an unwanted child, 
yet still you are the one
who have become unparented;
an Orphan King 
in a Borrowed Land,
always 
halfway to a 
hallway of 
all ways.
Categories: unmaking, blue, divorce, heartbreak, imagery,
Form: Free verse

The Nature

Unmaking the bond 
between cause and effect. 
You start throwing stones 
as a mark of intimacy.

Ipomea:
You wanted to learn the 
art of blooming silently 
at dawn.

Huddled like solar flares 
before colliding with 
a drift, you wanted me to live 
for eternity.

Watching sperm dance 
without tails 
in bell jar.

It was barely visible.
Cultivating a digital entry.
This was becoming 
a terror-haven.


Satish Verma
Categories: unmaking, art,
Form: ABC

Ancient Sins

Drunk with pride 
the streets are bursting
in self-indulgence.
Who was calling the shots ?

Do you know the words
between intermissions, carry a secret-
till the brazen scoop
finds the hidden meaning.

It was grave
very grave truice, unmaking love
between the estranged lovers-
when clouds were seducing the moon.

You don’t belong to this
crowd of renegades. Ants
will take away the
divorced dreams. 

•	
 
Fissile belly
has started showing signs
of reckoning. A gloom has settled,
gyrating in a sunken garden
for the hung corpses.

Never cruel were the times before
when blind needles were unstitching
the lips of frozen faces. I refuse
to start a prayer
till the grass covers a silent tomb.

Last night it had rained 
on the private flesh. It was
full of semen. You do not 
belong to this world
of pregnant pause.


Satish Verma
Categories: unmaking, art,
Form: ABC

Premium MemberIf We Were Back

Where once we laughed, bent over our middles,
pounding the table, or just smirking with a rueful
“Oh, my God”, sort of way, could I forget the silent beach?

Rustles of sand at my window as you walk off
hands in your pockets after our gazes met one last time
as you checked I remained alive and you had no duty

to fill any more. How could the sand slither so
beneath our feet, like an upturned timer wiping clean
wiping, wiping away our faces, our moisture,

until only the rollers were brave enough to face
me and the sand and the laughter and the quiet
and what had passed away never to return again.

Never the same river or ocean or hands awaiting
the clock of our unmaking until your rueful smile 
no longer smirks at the me that was never there
in your dreaming, and I am made who I am again. Real.

Sheri Fresonke Harper
Categories: unmaking, fantasy, forgiveness, introspection, loss,
Form: Free verse

Lost Enlightenment

My sentence: repentance
The prison in which I was the cause
Their motions; their reasons
Where everything was nothing I could want

My mindset; my music
The void that danced along with my soul
Couldn’t answer the silence
Within the sentence of being unknown

I let it consume me
I let the knowledge burden my fall
Destruction and wisdom
And then the everything that pierced it all

Unmoving; unending
The shapeless ghost that witnessed my deeds
I fought it in secret
Until in death my love was besieged

No stopping what saved me
Enlightenment was coveting my heart
Unbroken; still waiting
What I thought I’d killed was right near the start

Unfeeling in fearing
As deadly as the most honest wrong
Unmaking my breaking
On the path I never knew I was on
Categories: unmaking, happiness, hope, introspection, life,
Form: Lyric

Bleeding Addiction

I speak......the silence unmaking my words,

for here the shade of broken time does dwell.

I scream and fight to make cuts with these cords

that bind me closer than the ghosts to hell.


From Concrete illusions, soft Escape,

the edge of pain sharpening my Pleasure,

my joy Reality did shake,

Shattering......that glass glazed Measure,

my life-like dreams within its shape.


For what can make this place of joy, of deathly terror end?

The silky cuts, the bloody scrapes, the temp'ring torture bends

this sweet fulfilling agony...the sorrow of my soul,

does taunt my honor heedlessly, but tell me Not, I Know.


For only with this torture can my body freely breathe,

only this enticing pain can make my spirit free.

So tell me not that this is wrong for how can it not be?

this Loving Torment of my soul will Never let me be.
Categories: unmaking, angst, girlfriend-boyfriend, passion, teen,
Form: Lyric
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