Unintimidated Poems | Examples


Premium MemberA Lesser Man Would Defeat

    Archaic, outmoded, 
      ‘gauche,’ obsolete

    O, the invective employed
      a lesser man would defeat

    Yet unintimidated, he held his ground
      for he knew his principle was sound

    Adam viewed the fish, the animals, the birds 
      (paired up so nicely, he perceived) 
    Then, whoosh! out rushed his shocking words

    'Please, for a partner with whom to conceive
       I request MY complement, a lady named Eve'
Categories: unintimidated, marriage, strength, trust, words,
Form: Rhyme

When You Loved Me

When you loved me, you were in absentia 
most days -- then, the phone call, 
and the champagne, cooling 
in a bucket at some classy venue 
or another, of your choosing.  But first, 
came the grilling on the hot-seat barstool,
as it were, designed to disillusion me 
that I would matter much, underlining 
how easily you could leave without

regret.  Then, shifting gears, 
you'd give it up, because I was a thorough-
bred, gracefully jumping your hurdles, 
rewarded with your pleasure, 
imagining me unintimidated, placated
by a shower of gifts: baubles of silver 
and turquoise from Mexico, a gold bracelet 
of singular design, a spangled scarf 

I wrapped around my nude body
before lovemaking, charming you with 
the child in me.  But, mostly, I remember 
we scribbled on each other's backs 
as we lay together in the dark. I never 
guessed your messages, nor you mine.  
More vulnerable than you ever dreamed, 
I wrote "I love you" on your skin, 
knowing fingers were blind.
Categories: unintimidated, lost love, loveme,
Form: Narrative


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