Undistorted Poems


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To Dis a Ray

Tim felt prismatic and took off his polychrome Ray Bans

He had to revisit his novella and needed undistorted vision

To sort out gems from false gold and writer’s confusion


Had he really been so blinded with bands full of colour

Why were so few synonyms for variegations of rainbows

Was he too cheerful or flippant as an unredeemable scribe


The paper oozed with pots of gold and layers of colour

Chakras went up and down spines of meditation and joy

Jesters wore crowns and purple attire to rise from below


Clouds were made for the twilight of tranquil surrender

As he had to write all Peace in pastels on the fabric of hope

Was he really a utopian fantasist who shines through my pages


Repetitive maybe but the mist mixed with sunshine above

Droplets of kindness painted a picture of perfection’s illusion

He had to tweak it because even climbing roses had thorns 


So many words in the canon and chorus of dreams and delight

Revising a story amounts will not hinder narration and license

Maybe he will just dis one ray from his tale and see how it goes


17th November 2019
Categories: undistorted, devotion,
Form: Free verse

Crow's Feet

Take my leave.
Wrap it green around your finger
earth in grass gone sugar smooth
It's a remembrance of tomorrow
for your finger tips to soothe.
Take my breath.
Sweep it under frost and fortune
ice and passion melt, undo
It's the start of conversation
from my countenance to you.
Take my strength.
Show me mirrors undistorted
silver shine to mercury
It's a moment I'll remember
when you showed yourself to me.
Take my tears.
Glass encase the weeping show
liquid years embrace me now
It's so tangible, this sorrow
Only you can show me how.
Take my leave.
Wrap it as a scarf of blizzards
fluffed and warmed by winter sun
It's a memory to remember
as the moment we were young.
Categories: undistorted, introspection, time, me, me,
Form: Free verse


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