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Premium Member A Tale of Ultimate Faith

     Nachman was a revered Sage
        The greatest of his age

     One day he came to his stand
        Armless! What had happened?

     The next day, no legs either
        His students, now in a fever 

     On the morrow, his body covered with boils
        Panic set in – Was that the reward for all of Nachman's toils?

     Asked if to teach, he still could
        He replied ~ ‘What happens is all for the good’




     ~ Adapted from part of the tale in the Talmud 
        of 'Nachum, Ish Gam-zo,' meaning 'Nachum, 
        the man who says, "This too is for the good." 
        Tractate Ta'anis / Fasting - Chapter Three, 
        page 10b

Premium Member The 'Mighty Maccabees'

    A few hundred ragtag, rabbinic Maccabees
      faced the might of Antiochus’ army
        60,000 fighting men strong                                                                               
      
    The Chanukah story we all know  
       The rabbis delivered Greece a knockout blow
    Rededicated the Temple, and with a small cruise of oil
       lit the lamps of the Menorah, eight nights in all 

    Yet in our prayers, not a single word about 
       the military prowess of the ‘Mighty Maccabees’
     We thank God, and God alone, for routing Greece

     Mattathias, the leader, and his sons,
        five indomitable priests
     we praise instead
        ~ but only for their spiritual feats



     ___________________________________________  
     The Talmud asks: 'What is Chanukah?' The above is
     (a much-condensed version of) the answer it gives. 
     (Tractate 'Shabbos,' 21a - 23b)... Also found in the 
     'Abridged Book of Jewish Law, Laws of Chanukah,
     Solomon Gantzfried, (English version)

Premium Member Midnight Mission

His days were hard, his nights were long
The Psalmist woke, six hours 'fore dawn
Awakened by a breeze so slight
His chamber still bereft of light
Some scoff he rose the lyre to play
The record shows he stood and prayed   

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Notes:

The Psalmist is King David
The record is the Babylonian Talmud:
Tractate Brochos (Blessings), pages 3a & 3b
The lyre functioned as David's alarm clock, its strings
stirred by the breeze that arises in Israel at midnight
David formulated a long prayer service, known as Tikkun Chatzos,
loosely translated as 'Midnight Prayers,' which pious Jews still perform today


Legend of the Body

Legend of the body 

Well, I was gone 
it was on the day the mouth widened open in front of 
a vacant audience 
a hall world, devoid of ears 
and started shouting

As it happened
the hearing merits were sealed 
and the hall world faded out to mute 
and silence was hovering over the face of the earth
such 
a white silence
well bleached 


You know,
unlike a wedding dress
like Butoh dancers
white linen cloths with a pinch of pure soul within 
white washed face
and a drizzling drop of blood that escaped the ear's cave
all of that, in front of a vacant audience 
Do you know how it feels to shout in front the hollow hall world
Familiar with the colossal reverberation?   
If the hall world does not mute 
the eardrum could explode
hence
there is no voice, nor any that answers  
you stand alone in the life capsule 
open wide within a body

   
translated by Nadavi Noked

from: Tractate of faces, Ahshav publisher, Israel, 2015

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