Get Your Premium Membership

Top 25 Results (Member Poems)

You searched All Keyword(s): re-evaluated in category: All and form: All with 10 minimum and 5000 maximum characters.

Back

Details | Rhyme |

I Reinvented Your Voice

I reinvented your voice
and

I simplified your eyes I think 
and the firmness of your chest 
it became a personification of our 
farewell I

simplified your voice to an
unfulfilled reassurance I reduced
your fingers to a gesture
unreturned 

Redefined a couple of terms
claimed myself the right to change 
their conventional sense 
apparently I

Re-evaluated those few words
stubbornly reinventing
ambiguity of love
did you at least enjoy

The streaks of blue which I left 
after every 
entanglement of our thoughts
my adventure-driven touch (?)

In the immature naivety 
of the songs
that played in the background 
of this mismatched game

(I reinvented your voice)


Details | Other |

Observations

OBSERVATIONS

 imagine
a  setting
 to add
  desire

spaces
for
ideas
 pauses
by accident

 illuminate
the day
with
wonder

 think
the  readymade
  notion
of  playfulness
as
reality
 &
as a concept
 significance
shared
in
 practice

constraints
begone

 understanding
re-evaluated
 controlled by
anonymous
visuals
perceived
in
  opportunity

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Details | Political Verse |

Control Issues

You say
you need,
we need,
to regain control.

Control to overwhelm me?

Or control together
discussed and planned
and then implemented
as a partnership
or team?

And, later, re-evaluated
for meeting win/win GoldRule Standards
co-governing healthy democracies
of resilient
non-violent communication,
self/other internal
and external mediation
open to seasonally appropriate climates
of remediation.

Do you need some experience
of cooperative EgoNature
mirroring EarthSpirit
win/win giftedness
timeliness,
spaciousness
for ego/eco-therapeutic experiences
transforming aptness,
appropriateness,
appreciation for sufficiency
and beauty,

GraceFullness of this EgoHere
with EcoPolitical Now
getting something win/win worthy accomplished.

Do you feel you need
some overpowering narcissistic control
unilateral and unforgiving,
ubiquitously authoritative?

Patriarchal control
that means if you have said it
then so it must be,
so it is,
Amen

Mentally diseased
win/lose capitalistic control
of your autonomous value investments
expecting control over social capital returns

If you have bought control
then those who have been purchased
must recognize our true market value
rests in our return
on your initial up front controlling interests

Which do not seem to include
my best and healthiest,
resonantly enlightened
and resiliently empowered
win/win co-redemption

Sacred experiences
of cooperative co-investment,
karmic ease,
co-animated Mundi,
EcoMatriotic waters
recovering unrealistic
secularizing
colonizing control anticipation
by historically privileged
EgoPatriarchal 
controlling evil winds.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things