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Writing Poetry

I have my dictionary, a thesaurus and a laptop filled with billions of pieces of information at my fingertips. There’s a staggering amount of words and combinations of words hidden in my keyboard. Like scrabble pieces spread out on the table, all I need to do is pull them out in the right order, at the right time, and with the right flow to create the right image. Aah, this should be easy.

writing is easy
getting your words to make sense 
is the hardest part

Right Image

R-ays
O-f
S-un
I-n
E-arly

M-orn
A-re
E-mitted

A-s
V-iew
E-xhibits
R-ight
I-mage
L-etting
L-ight
A-bound

Topic: Birthday of Rosie Mae A. Averilla (May 26)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Premium Member Images of You

I MOVE 
AROUND AND AROUND
TRYING TO GET THE RIGHT IMAGE 
OF YOU 
IN MY MINDS EYE

I COME 
CLOSER AND CLOSER 
AND THEN BACK OFF
SEEKING THE RIGHT COMPOSITION 
OF YOU AND EVERYTHING ELSE

I MOVE 
IN AND OUT
FOCUSING SHARPLY 
ON THOSE THINGS
THAT SHOULD STAND OUT

AND BLURRING THOSE THINGS 
THAT SHOULD BE LEFT 
IN THE BACKGROUND
VAGUE IMAGES 
BEST FORGOTTEN


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