Revisions Poems - Poems about Revisions

Do You Love Yourself in God’s Will? Do you think you love your soul as much as I do? You should honor this fact: You’re a part of God’s will for my life, and your dregs are a buoyance, lift boat of my soul! Who’s more blessed? And who sleepwalks through rhymes where a heart is laid bare? Are my...

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Imagination reminds me of things I dare not remember No idea if they happened or not Certainly not swirling in pinks and oranges the way I wanted things to do, amid black and white stripes I was a modern era woman who adores the mixing of dots and stipes No one does that! Until they did, famous designers, shaking us...

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Poe was always revising his prose between publications. Here are the longest extended versions of sentences he shortened for their final publication in his lifetime: "We loved each other with a love that was more than love, more love than fit in an empty grotes bag, more than the love of worms if you were a...

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Designed Evolution? As Blue Sky’s dreams take root in fields like Daffodils That blossom knowledge Love does serve all human souls, Their truth grows wild across our lands! Oh, every crevice touches strands Where Evolution has a chance to praise God’s poems, dance His dance! Though man loves choice, diversity reflects God’s goals (Constrained by heaven’s purpose?) Change is what...

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Could we see and hear and feel and think better more ubiquitously and cooperatively and inclusively if DreamTime speaks in naturally eco-logical language of motion as emotions co-empathically accessible to all RNA/DNA informated integratively regenerative co-arising ecosystemic Ego-programs? In our dreams we all speak the same language of fear and anger, threatening terminal self-hatred, but also love and joy, promising an eternity of bliss if only these would...

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No Sweat Revisions (Booze Helps) Poet speaks: “To write a poem you can easily revise it’s best to use free verse, for it requires so little thinking and besides with thought could come content revisions just might lose. Why take any chances?” Reader speaks: "Whatever does he mean? My God this guy is deep! Most modern stuff is so opaque, but here the words are clear. Though purpose...

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